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HI Capes, Fun premise. Can't wait to see what Martha suggests and what Clark ends up doing. Question: If Lois wants them to dress up as Superman and Lois, then what "costume" is Lois going to wear?  And I just thought....  Could Lois possibly know? This was a pleasure to read so far.... gerry
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That's certainly an excellent first try, Capes! Nice writing style and interesting ideas  Keep it up! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Hi, Great start. “Clark!” she protested. “Everyone does those! Don’t you want to do something different?”
“Lois, a lot of people dress like Superman, too, you know,” he said.
“But not Superman and Lois,” she said smugly. “Plus, I think our costume will look a lot more authentic than theirs. After all I know Superman, and I’ve seen the suit up close many times.” 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Ooh, fun!!!  More soon! Wendy PS - I've just edited your story post so that it reads Part 1. Otherwise people may think that it's a complete story and get disappointed.
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Welcome, Capes! This story has a great start! I can't wait to see what kind of solution Clark and the folks come up with...it's just like Lois to throw him into a predicament like this! JD
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Welcome Capes and great start! Looking forward to the next part.
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Hiya! LOL - I'm looking forward to part two. Gee wiz, what's going to happen!?! How on earth is Clark going to handle this one.
OOOOOOOH I want more.
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Oh boy Clark. Just tell her! 
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Lots of us are reading, so you'd better keep posting! Martha, Jonathan: Help Superman!  Susan
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Hee. Very cute premise, and I definitely want to know more. I particularly liked the tidbit about Chinese food. Looking forward to what comes next!
Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."
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Oh this is GOOD Dress up like Superman??? Why not? He's got the general build and colouring...must feel like the most obvious choice for Lois...tee hee! Great job!
Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known."
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Welcome to the boards, Capes!  Tricia 
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Is Lois taking belly dancing lessons or something? Hope she doesnt dress as "Betty Crocker".
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Where is the next part? Jose
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This is gonna be fun!!!  Can't wait to see what he makes of this. ~Julia 
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It's the day before Hallowe'en! Is the next part coming out soon? .... hmmm perhaps I missed the post. I'm going to look again.
ROCK ON!
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I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Just caught onto this one!  LOVE it! The options as I see them: 1. There are no Superman costumes left at the store. 2. He tells her he would be uncomfortable wearing tights. (it IS a lot to ask of someone; you should not just assume that someone will wear tights when you tell them to!) 3. He calls her on her CLEAR attraction to him (She is asking him to wear TIGHTS! For Pete's sake!) 4. He stuffs the suit w/ a pillow and reveals to Lois that behind his business suits he hides a potbelly. ~NICOLE
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