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#292998 09/18/22 01:20 AM
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More sweet moments and a little flashback for Lois…

Part 2

You can find the story TOC here (with links to the first and second stories as well if you want or need to catch up!)


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What a lovely surprise on a Sunday morning. I like how Lois is confused, too. And I know about weird dreams or non-dreams when you've just had a child. Pulled like crazy on my husband's upper leg to save my daughter from suffocating under the pillows. Turned out it wasn't her back I was pulling at - and no wonder she was so hard to move.
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Anyway, great chapter. Both need to adjust to the changes in their lives, even if they're good.

Hope the two of them will talk, soon.


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I need to catch up! Plan on putting this on my lunchtime reading list!


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Oh, I forgot all the feelings in this chapter. The way she forgot he was back home. The way she touched him trying to heel his wounds. The rocking chair surprise! I love a good rocking chair.

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Awww ^_^ I can't wait to see him wake up cuddled with her :3

And wow, yeah, sleep deprivation can really make you do crazy things.

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I love how messy everything is, how even though Lois is happy to have him home, that isn't the only feeling. How everyone has to keep adjusting and readjusting. It makes every thing feel so real!


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Bakasi—LOL at your weird dream! And yep, they’ve both had so many changes to adjust to…

Morgana—Glad to have you along when you get it it! Enjoy!!

CarrieRene—Yeah, I definitely love all the feels in this chapter! The first two chapters are ones I had finished early on, obviously, and when I wasn’t sure this was going anywhere, I sure enjoyed reading them. smile

Blueowl—Yes! Such sweet cuddling! I’m sure you’ll enjoy that part. laugh

Queenie—Yes! Life is messy! And definitely something I cherished about writing Away From the Sun and wanted to make sure happened here—love doesn’t equal happily ever after. There’s work to be done…

Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

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