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Yay to more ficlets!!

I LOVE this premise and could see it growing into a much longer story...! smile1

My favorite line is this one:

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Lois heaved a sigh. "Look, there's nothing to investigate about a masked guy who's performing some good tricks and calls himself 'Magi-Kal'. What am I supposed to find out? Why he can't properly spell the word magical?"

This is just so Lois, totally on point!

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Haha!! This was GREAT!! And I totally had the same line copied to my clipboard to paste for feedback, but Bek beat me to it! lol Best line ever!!! notworthy

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Magi-Kal. So clever, I love it!

And I loved the bit about her feeling a twinge of guilt about her plant. That poor thing...

Also, wow! More please!?

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Thanks guys. So glad you're liking this. I might have one or two other short stories up my sleeve that will take place in this AU. Now I just need to be prepared for next Friday. wink Thanks for the lovely feedback


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A magician that looks like him, I would totally be there. And I could see her really trying to figure it out. Love it.

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Ooh, this demands a sequel! clap


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Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
Ooh, this demands a sequel! clap

I'll see what the muse can do about that. laugh


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Hi Barbara!

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You're not honestly expecting me to chase a story that's something for Cat or the tabloids, are you?"
That’s wonderfully offensive (to Cat)!

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He's the real thing. I saw him fly for Heaven's sake. There were no strings. And he froze a rose solid while he spun on his heels."
Is that an alt-u with the Supenduous Chuck?

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and calls himself 'Magi-Kal'.
Oooh, that’s a great name!

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The plant's already withered leaves seemed to look even more sorry than they had before. Lois felt a pang of guilt.
If the Daily Planet assistant staff unionized, that plant will lead the charge.

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Lois couldn't help but smile as she watched her giddy friend. "So, he's good. Doesn't mean that the laws of nature don't apply to him. What did Perry tell you?"
I wonder if they have started to use electro magnets to float by now?

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Lois frowned. "This is not some elaborate scheme to get a date with me, is it?"
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Lois shook her head. "In your dreams, Olsen. In your dreams."
Oh, that’s a fun alt-u premise indeed!

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Very clever Bakasi! Looking forward to the sequel.

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Ooookay I just discovered this and I'm super intrigued!! I love your premise!! Great work with both Lois and Jimmy!


What we've got here is failure to communicate...

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