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Thank you for the continued support for this story. I am very proud of this chapter.

Comments go here for Part 3 of What About Love?


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I am enjoying this story, the first chapter was one to get me hooked. But, just one more chapter? Things are pretty messed up to be wrapped up in a single chapter. I guess unless it is longer than the last one, you covered a lot of ground in that one. I await to see how you wrap this up.

Mike

Loved this chapter! I like how we got to see who Camilla really is, and then the final scene with L&C at Clark's apartment....!

Poor Lois having to deal with her mom...!!!


Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up!

-Bek

Thank you, Mike, for the feedback. I appreciate it very much. I am glad you are enjoying this story. I already have Part 4 outlined and will be starting it later today. Yes, I do plan on making it a bit longer than the last one. Plus Part 5, so technically two chapters, not just one. I will be continuing on with the Lois and Ellen relationship and adding more on Intergang/Mindy plus we will get to know Camilla a bit more.


Thank you, Bek, for the feedback and helping me with this chapter. You know me I have so many ideas going for this. I really enjoy writing Camilla and how she is a bit different from Lois. Lois needed more female friends. And yes, the rewrite of the ending turned out better than I expected.

Soooo much going on!! And… should be be worried or not worried that Ellen is staying at the Raven??

I LOOOOOOVE all the little touches and moments that show Clark is just so in tune with and supportive of her! Gah!!

Poor Lois is on a rollercoaster for sure! Glad she seems to be willing to let Camilla be a friend now, especially after talking to her.

Sara

Really liked Clark's reassurance and the conversation Lois had with Camilla.
I hope Lois' mother gets the emotional help she needs as well as the physical, but, talking from experience, some people just refuse to change&get help, and in the end you have to do what's right for you and your family and sometimes that's limiting exposure to toxic relationships. I wish it wasn't the case, cuz it's tragic, but you can't control what others do, just yourself.

Looking forward to more.