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FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road #296106 05/11/23 11:16 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Let me know what you think. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296109 05/12/23 08:13 AM
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Ailujecarg Blogger A Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 22 New Jersey, USA	Yay! Lois and Martha meet! Looking forward to the corn festival now Can't wait for the next installment!

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296110 05/12/23 08:19 AM
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SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Awwww -- the interaction between Lois and Martha is perfect! I do wonder whether/how Clark will manage to attend the corn festival -- that's a lot of people to be around, and if MagiKal ends up showing up in Smallville, that might be difficult to explain away! I hope they are able to figure things out for Clark quickly (and...ack...I'm scared of all those glowing green rocks that are surely around...). Love hearing Lois's growing feelings for Clark...! Looking forward to next week!! -Bek

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296111 05/12/23 08:28 AM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	Yay, they're in Smallville! And Lois meeting Martha was perfect! I can't wait for them to get to the bottom of Clark’s troubles! I hope Lois can work some more of HER magic Looking forward to more.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296113 05/12/23 11:40 AM
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Songbird Beat Reporter S Joined: Jul 2020 Posts: 401 Likes: 41 Southern California	Thanks for another terrific chapter! The meeting between Lois and Martha was perfect. Martha mentioned the corn festival. I wonder if Clark will be able to attend. Maybe they’ll resolve his problem before it starts. The ending had me smiling too! Like always, I’m looking forward to next Friday. I love this universe!

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296114 05/12/23 01:56 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Bakasi: The time has come for me to get into this series. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296115 05/13/23 01:01 AM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Originally Posted by Super Bek I do wonder whether/how Clark will manage to attend the corn festival -- that's a lot of people to be around, and if MagiKal ends up showing up in Smallville, that might be difficult to explain away! MagiKal at the corn festival is indeed an interesting thought. But I have something else in mind. Originally Posted by Morgana The time has come for me to get into this series. You're joining just when it's about to get interesting. Thanks for the feedback, everyone. Last edited by bakasi; 05/13/23 01:02 AM. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296120 05/13/23 09:29 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida	Squeeeeee! This is getting heart-melty. I'm so looking forward to seeing what they can discover! ~•~

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296124 05/13/23 03:28 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	I really, really like these little linked ficlets, Barbara. They're cute, tense, romantic, touching, and altogether too short, even though they each give us a complete moment in the lives of Lois and Clark. Here's my favorite line from this one. Quote Clark’s mother, it seemed, possessed her own kind of magic. That may be the most concise and accurate description of Martha I've ever read. Makes me jealous for not having written it myself. I can't wait to find out what Clark and Lois find out about the cause of the hiccups. I still have my pet theory, so we'll see how in tune I am with your thoughts soon (I hope!). Keep them coming! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296136 05/14/23 04:26 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39	Hi Barbara! Quote Down The Yellow Brick Road Something to do with meeting a witch? Quote Lois pulled her suitcase off the luggage belt and took a deep breath. Oooooohhhhh… Quote Four rounds on the luggage belt were far more than she could reasonably explain anyway. she could claim that she fell into a nest of airport drug smugglers. Quote Now here she was, barging in on their lives, a reporter who knew details about their son that most journalists would be dying to print. NUNK: An alien that looks like a human man? Did he at least probe you? No? Pass. Next! Quote Clark had decided to walk the distance. Oh boy. No wonder Martha’s not happy. His boy got one smile from the woman and four years of saved up college money is down the drain and he becomes a vagabond. Quote . “I’m Martha. Clark never mentioned how pretty you are. Thank you so much for bringing him back home.” Quote You wouldn’t believe how much Clark and his father can eat.” Awww. Cute! Quote . “That boy is stubborn as a mule. So, immovable object, meet irresistible force. Quote Somehow you convinced him to try and find out what happened to him, which is more than I ever accomplished. /Draws coke-bottle shape in the air with hands Quote “We’re holding the annual corn festival. It’ll be fun.” Oooh, they’re gonna meet the town cross dresser and the ex girlfriend! Quote Lois had the strangest feeling that a whirlwind had picked her up and carried her toward the land of Oz. /points at title/ Quote As Clark’s eyes met Lois’, his lips twitched into the brightest smile she’d ever seen. It made her insides melt. Oh no, he’s hickupping all over Lois! /Inserts Ark of Covenant scene from Raiders of the Lost Ark/ Quote Lois desperately hoped that once he was free, he would return her feelings. She no longer wanted to imagine her life without him in it. Awwww…free-spirited Lois is adorable! And now I’m looking forward to next Friday. Or how they call it in Smallville – the Husk-Off! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296144 05/14/23 04:34 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,110 Likes: 42 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,110 Likes: 42 Albuquerque, NM	OMG I love this part! ALL THE FEELS! Gahhh…there’s always something so magical (no pun intended ) about when Martha and Lois are together, and you nailed the feelings and characterization so wonderfully! Is it Friday yet?? Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #296156 05/15/23 03:34 AM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Thanks KSaraSara, Queen of the Capes, DarthMichael and Terry. No it's not Friday yet. But I hope you'll find the next installment worth the wait. Lois and Clark are definitely making some progress, though maybe not quite in the way you're expecting Last edited by bakasi; 05/15/23 03:54 AM. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #300035 05/31/24 03:40 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,430 Likes: 6 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,430 Likes: 6 Delaware	<Happy sigh> I’ve always loved Matha and Lois’s interactions on the show, and your story did canon justice. Now Lois just needs to meet Jonathan… Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK: Down The Yellow Brick Road bakasi #300043 06/01/24 09:46 AM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Oh, I've been waiting for you to reach this part of the story. It's never too dark to be cool.

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