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FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) #296346 05/28/23 12:03 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) Jon's feeling the entire gamut of emotions on this super long Saturday (gosh he is only 8, and this is A LOT to carry)...but at least now he knows. Chapter 8 posted today as well, 'cause I didn't want to leave it on that... (plus Chapter 8 is quite short) Let me know what you think! -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) SuperBek #296352 05/28/23 02:05 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	Thanks for posting the next chapter with this, cuz leaving it there would be EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING. I get that he's only 8, but man.... one would have thought an opportunity it talk with your dad.... Hopefully his emotions will calm and real conversation and growth can happen.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) Blueowl #296355 05/28/23 02:25 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Originally Posted by Blueowl Thanks for posting the next chapter with this, cuz leaving it there would be EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING. I get that he's only 8, but man.... one would have thought an opportunity it talk with your dad.... Hopefully his emotions will calm and real conversation and growth can happen. That was my thought too -- that I didn't want to leave y'all with just that...since the next chapter ends very differently. And yes, he's...struggling with all of these emotions, and a big part of that is that he's realized just how much his mom and grandparents are hurting, since he didn't really know the extent of it all. So it's just completely overwhelming him right now. Poor kiddo. Hopefully you are more satisfied with the ending of chapter 8! -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) SuperBek #296358 05/28/23 02:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Oh man. This poor kid is really carrying such a heavy load! Your story reminds me of another tearjerker by Becky Bain called Ad Astra Per Aspera. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) Morgana #296363 05/28/23 10:29 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Originally Posted by Morgana Oh man. This poor kid is really carrying such a heavy load! Your story reminds me of another tearjerker by Becky Bain called Ad Astra Per Aspera. Ah, I don't think I've read that one. I'll have to check it out! He is carrying so much. And this whole having to experience everyone else's emotions and feelings...and now knowing so much more than he did before... And being only 8... It's a lot. Thanks for reading! -Bek

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) SuperBek #296366 05/29/23 08:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Becky only wrote three stories for the fandom, but they are powerful. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) SuperBek #297588 09/23/23 07:36 PM
Joined: Aug 2023 Posts: 63 Likes: 1 México CarolD Freelance Reporter
CarolD Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2023 Posts: 63 Likes: 1 México	El buen corazón de Clark lo obligó a irse, pero no creo que se diera cuenta de cuánto le iba a costar a su familia y a él mismo. Pobre Jon, está cargando demasiado para ser tan pequeño.

Re: FDK Save A Slice of Pie For Me (7/15) CarolD #297601 09/24/23 12:20 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Originally Posted by CarolD El buen corazón de Clark lo obligó a irse, pero no creo que se diera cuenta de cuánto le iba a costar a su familia y a él mismo. Pobre Jon, está cargando demasiado para ser tan pequeño. Yeah... If Clark had known, there's NO way he would have left. Jon has a good support system in his family, but he has to tell them what's going on first! Thanks for reading!

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