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Chapter 5: Targeted

So the Boker is shifting his focus....

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Oh boy, Lois!! I'm worried about her now!!

I know Clark took off really quickly, but I was surprised she let him go! Good justification though in the conversation with Star, that she understood the Boker couldn't attack two people at once.

Ack!! Looking forward to the next chapter soon!!!

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Hi Blueowl!

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She hadn’t even felt this way when Superman had left for Nightfall.
Awwww

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”Trapped, alone, and . . . I don’t know. It felt like being buried alive,” he said.

Lois frowned. “Did anything like that happen when you were younger?”
Nah, he was never in a tight, confining space, as far as he can remember.

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”Baron Sunday. He’s crazy! He’s going to try to kill Superman now! You’ve got to warn him! I’m Zi–“
And that's what they call a ‘lead’ in them gumshoe novels.

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It was time to take Star up on her offer of help. There had to be a way to combat this insanity directly.
They could send a zombie? Hmm…Lex isn’t dead yet, is he? This is in Season One?

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From what I understand, doing anything like this more than once every twelve hours is nuts. And let me tell you, if practitioners classify anything as ‘nuts’ you know it’s all sorts of bat wing crazy and should never be done!”
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Yeah, like if the Joker says that it’s too violent, you know that you have gone way overboard.

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The snake appeared on his chest.
The constraining suit bit was really clever!

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The magic has to come from within,” Star explained. “Some people suggest carrying a keepsake can help, perhaps a family heirloom, something to draw strength from.
Yeah, but Clark carrying Lois around the whole day will look mighty suspicious.

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. However, in doing so, that will mean being exposed to the curse. I don’t know what that will mean for you. Even though the curse is specifically designed to target the person the Boker wants to harm, you may be just as affected. I don’t know.”
So, Lois will become afraid of tight dark places? Does this mean she will no longer crawl into air ducts because of said phobia?

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“That’s a risk I’m willing to take. I won’t let this Boker hurt Clark or anyone else again if I can help it,” Lois promised.
Clark won’t like that one bit. Best not tell him beforehand.

Onto part 6! Hmm…wait… confused

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"I'm okay," Clark reminded her once again later that afternoon as she glanced at him for the twentieth time.

"I know. It's just. . . . " She trailed off, glad they were beyond hearing range from their coworkers. She looked back down.

"Me too," he said softly.

"What? ‘Me too’?" Lois asked, confused.

"Scared," Clark admitted.

GAHHH!!! I really loved this bit!! You can feel the love and concern from them both. love

And ack! He definitely CAN attack both at the same time! lol Now part of me is wondering if… so Lois is having to acknowledge her love for Clark… is she going to have to do the saving, the anchoring with Superman instead of Clark???

Ahhh! Looking forward to the next part!

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SuperBek -
Originally Posted by SuperBek
Oh boy, Lois!! I'm worried about her now!!

I know Clark took off really quickly, but I was surprised she let him go! Good justification though in the conversation with Star, that she understood the Boker couldn't attack two people at once.

Ack!! Looking forward to the next chapter soon!!!

-Bek
laugh Thanks. I suppose you'll see really soon what happens with Lois....


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Nah, he was never in a tight, confining space, as far as he can remember.
Yeah smirk
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They could send a zombie? Hmm…Lex isn’t dead yet, is he? This is in Season One?
Season 2, some time between Madam Ex and TOGOM.
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Yeah, like if the Joker says that it’s too violent, you know that you have gone way overboard.
Just a bit.
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Yeah, but Clark carrying Lois around the whole day will look mighty suspicious.
But surely that would work, right? :P
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Clark won’t like that one bit. Best not tell him beforehand.
Well, hopefully he won't argue with the results too much....
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Onto part 6! Hmm…wait… confused
wave Michael
Thanks ^_^ Next part will be up shortly.


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GAHHH!!! I really loved this bit!! You can feel the love and concern from them both. love

And ack! He definitely CAN attack both at the same time! lol Now part of me is wondering if… so Lois is having to acknowledge her love for Clark… is she going to have to do the saving, the anchoring with Superman instead of Clark???

Ahhh! Looking forward to the next part!

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Yeah, I sort of laughed when I wrote that they both can't be attacked at once lol. Poor Star. As for the anchoring.... well....
*goes to post next part*

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Season 2, some time between Madam Ex and TOGOM.
Thanks for the reminder, Blueowl! Which means we can use dead Lex as a zombie! If they can find him.

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Good thing Clark is talking to Lois. And yay for Star telling Lois how to help Clark.


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Originally Posted by bakasi
Good thing Clark is talking to Lois. And yay for Star telling Lois how to help Clark.

Yeah, communication is pretty important, especially right now for them.... And yay for Lois being proactive smile Thanks for commenting!


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