Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
#297122 08/01/23 03:59 PM
Joined: Jan 2019
Posts: 1,011
Likes: 21
Blueowl Offline OP
Top Banana
OP Offline
Top Banana
Joined: Jan 2019
Posts: 1,011
Likes: 21
This MIGHT become something bigger. No clue yet.

Chapter 1: Hurt

Thoughts?

Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 2,665
Likes: 58
Pulitzer
Online Content
Pulitzer
Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 2,665
Likes: 58
This was perfect. I wonder how Lois will explain Clark's continued absence. I love how Lois handles the situation. The boys are just awestruck and Clark is regretting he didn't check before coming home.


Good thing there is a sunlamp at the cabin. Can't wait for that next chapter


It's never too dark to be cool. cool
Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 2,591
Likes: 11
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 2,591
Likes: 11
That's interesting. How old are the boys by this point?

Andreia


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
Joined: Jan 2019
Posts: 1,011
Likes: 21
Blueowl Offline OP
Top Banana
OP Offline
Top Banana
Joined: Jan 2019
Posts: 1,011
Likes: 21
bakasi - Thanks ^_^. I'm making some last moment edits but hope to post the next part today or tomorrow.

Ultra Woman - They're about 8. I wanted to have it be a little vague in case I needed wiggle room later. Thanks for the review smile

Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 2,591
Likes: 11
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 2,591
Likes: 11
It makes sense. They were still kids and would have been too wonderstruck to pay close attention. And over time those memories get fuzzy.


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Moderated by  Blueowl, PuffyTiger 

Link Copied to Clipboard
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5