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A work long i the making. Please let me know what you think.


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Oh boy, I've been waiting for you to start posting this! smile1

Interesting, tense start!! eek

All of Lois's emotions are so intense! I was holding my breath right along with her every time the elevator dinged!

Glad you showed Superman was out and about, although I worry what's going on with him as well...

Looking forward to the next chapter!!

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Originally Posted by SuperBek
Interesting, tense start!! eek

All of Lois's emotions are so intense! I was holding my breath right along with her every time the elevator dinged!

That's what I was aiming for. Glad you liked it so far. I'm curious what you'll think about the rest. laugh


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Great to see such a long story from you. I'm so used to the Magikal verse (which gets me to work on a Friday morning and I love BTW and should review!), so seeing 32 chapters promised is very exciting. Looking forward to #2. smile


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Let me encourage you to take this one in. It will leave you all but breathless as you await the next chapter.

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Originally Posted by gr8shadesofElvis
Great to see such a long story from you. I'm so used to the Magikal verse (which gets me to work on a Friday morning and I love BTW and should review!), so seeing 32 chapters promised is very exciting. Looking forward to #2. smile


Thanks for the double feedback. I hope you will enjoy this tale, too. I'm intending to post the next part some time tomorrow, probably in evening.


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Let me encourage you to take this one in. It will leave you all but breathless as you await the next chapter.

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Poor Lois. It looks like her frayed nerves are getting the better of her. I could feel her trepidation and uneasiness after a scary nightmare.

Has Clark been at the fire all night? Or is there something else going on? spider I hope it doesn't ruin their date.

Looking forwward to the next chapter.

Andreia


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