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FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 #297289 08/19/23 09:51 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,707 Likes: 59 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,707 Likes: 59 Germany	A work long i the making. Please let me know what you think. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 bakasi #297291 08/19/23 11:28 PM
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SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	Oh boy, I've been waiting for you to start posting this! Interesting, tense start!! All of Lois's emotions are so intense! I was holding my breath right along with her every time the elevator dinged! Glad you showed Superman was out and about, although I worry what's going on with him as well... Looking forward to the next chapter!! -Bek
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Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 bakasi #297298 08/20/23 03:13 PM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,707 Likes: 59 Germany	Originally Posted by SuperBek Interesting, tense start!! All of Lois's emotions are so intense! I was holding my breath right along with her every time the elevator dinged! That's what I was aiming for. Glad you liked it so far. I'm curious what you'll think about the rest. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 bakasi #297302 08/21/23 01:38 PM
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gr8shadesofElvis Top Banana Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 1,013 Likes: 5 England	Great to see such a long story from you. I'm so used to the Magikal verse (which gets me to work on a Friday morning and I love BTW and should review!), so seeing 32 chapters promised is very exciting. Looking forward to #2. When Life Gives You Green Velvet Curtains, Make a Green Velvet Dress.
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Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 bakasi #297305 08/21/23 05:10 PM
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Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,148 Likes: 4 Southwest USA	Let me encourage you to take this one in. It will leave you all but breathless as you await the next chapter. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing
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Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 Terry Leatherwood #297308 08/22/23 09:39 AM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,707 Likes: 59 Germany	Originally Posted by gr8shadesofElvis Great to see such a long story from you. I'm so used to the Magikal verse (which gets me to work on a Friday morning and I love BTW and should review!), so seeing 32 chapters promised is very exciting. Looking forward to #2. Thanks for the double feedback. I hope you will enjoy this tale, too. I'm intending to post the next part some time tomorrow, probably in evening. Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood Let me encourage you to take this one in. It will leave you all but breathless as you await the next chapter. Thanks for advertising for this fic. And thank you once again for agreeing to beta. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Matter Of Trust 1/32 bakasi #297310 08/23/23 07:21 AM
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Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,603 Likes: 12 Brazil - RS	Poor Lois. It looks like her frayed nerves are getting the better of her. I could feel her trepidation and uneasiness after a scary nightmare. Has Clark been at the fire all night? Or is there something else going on? I hope it doesn't ruin their date. Looking forwward to the next chapter. Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

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