Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 574
Likes: 14
Columnist
OP Offline
Columnist
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 574
Likes: 14
New part of Murder Over Metropolis. Enjoy. Thank you to everyone that is enjoying this story.

Murder Over Metropolis Part 5

Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 2,666
Likes: 58
Pulitzer
Online Content
Pulitzer
Joined: Jun 2006
Posts: 2,666
Likes: 58
Uh oh, now Clark is arrested. I'm glad Lois is still on his side, though his continued silence about what he was really doing while Luthor was killed is clearly wearing on her trust in him. Tell her already, Clark. Even if he can't use his alibi for the police it's important that Lois is convinced beyond any shadow of a doubt.

Can't wait for the next chapter


It's never too dark to be cool. cool
Joined: Apr 2010
Posts: 3,831
Likes: 42
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2010
Posts: 3,831
Likes: 42
Benson…there is something wrong with him. He is almost gleeful about arresting Clark. Does this man have an agenda we are unaware of?

When is the next part going to be posted? grovel


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 574
Likes: 14
Columnist
OP Offline
Columnist
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 574
Likes: 14
Originally Posted by Morgana
Benson…there is something wrong with him. He is almost gleeful about arresting Clark. Does this man have an agenda we are unaware of?

When is the next part going to be posted? grovel


I always love the feedback from you. Well, in the first draft, Benson had a thing for Lois, but that was taken out. Already too much going on between Lois & Clark. And I have been trying to post by the following Tuesday. It usually depends on when my editors get the line edits back to me... hint..hint SuperBek and KSaraSara.


Moderated by  Kaylle, SuperBek 

Link Copied to Clipboard
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5