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I think it's adorable! Krypto totally radiates "old dog enjoying retirement" vibes, and I love the idea that he's arguably Lois' dog. XD


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Hmmm, I can totally see Lois and Clark's children behaving that way and dear, sweet Krypto looking on in amusement!


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Loved how this one was written from Krypto's point of view. Very sweet tale. Thank you for sharing.

Human pups are strange indeed.


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Ahhh sweet Krypto! I also loved this point of view! Thanks for walking the dog! 😁😍

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Oh I loved this. And having it told from Krypto's POV make sit all the more funny.
Well, it's kids of Lois and CLark, so all the bickering is expected. And of course, Laura would be a mini-writer. :-) Well, the skill set on storytelling can be...expanded a little but eh, she will learn!
And of course Jon would play Mr. know it all only to then be clueless himself. Very Lois of him. Althoug there's a fair argument to be made about spelling an alien word. Like...I always found that scene in Superman 1978 weird where Clark "corrects" Lois on the spelling of Krypton and I'm just like "there would not be a correct spelling either way? It's not part of an Earth language after all..."
You know, the whole human pups thing is double ironic given that Krypto is both a dog AND an alien LOL
Anyway that was a cute little something.


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Hi Amanda!

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. I also realized that poor Krypto hasn’t been out for a walk in a while so I’m going to jump in and take on the Walk the Dog Challenge.
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“Mom doesn’t like it when you get on the couch, Krypto,” Jon said but he continued scratching.

Krypto just huffed and tilted his head to give the boy better access.
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Krypto huffed again and looked up at the pups. He wished they would stop bickering.
Yes, more quiet ear scratching.

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“Coco went in to a cave – into should be one word.”

“Don’t edit my copy. Just read!”
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Jon shrugged. “It’s okay, I guess. It’d be better if it was Krypto though. Krypto wouldn’t run away from dumb wolves. He’d get them with his heat vision.”
KRYPTO: Kneel before Zodog!

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“But it’s not about Krypto.”

“Well, it should be.”

“I can’t spell Krypto.”

“That’s easy! It’s K-R- um… uh…”
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Krypto let out another yawn and smacked his mouth a few times. Then he rolled on his back and sprawled over the full length of the couch. Human pups were strange.
That was a nice walk around the block with Krypto's POV clap

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