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From Chapter 3...


Lois woke up, reached through the darkness for the lamp, and checked her watch.

It was just after three.

Why had she woken up? Was it somehow related to her long sleep the night before?

She felt wide awake. She stood from the bed, went to the window, and looked out over the moon-lit fields. She could easily make out the shadows of the trees and the barn.

In the city, the lights diminished the effects of the moon. Here, it gave an eerie, shadowy presence to everything, but she could see surprisingly well.

Looking to her right, she realised there was a light on in the barn.

Bess!

Could she be having her calf?

Was Clark down there in the barn?

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A second chapter so soon. Thank you. Martha and Clark already worm their way into Lois' heart. I'm curious what happened to Jonathan. Does this Clark have powers? The lowering of his glasses seems to indicate that he does. I'm assuming that Jack might be the Jack we got to know in the show.
Some answers, but still a lot left to find out. Can't wait for the next part.


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Thanks for another terrific chapter! I love this story! Even though Martha is still wearing her wedding ring, I’m thinking that Jonathan has sadly died since there is no mention of him. That would also explain why Clark
didn’t leave Smallville. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thank you for posting chapters so quickly!

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Still so many unanswered questions but I'm loving the journey towards the answers.
Clark driving the tractor around got the song Amarillo Sky stuck in my head.

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And the mysteries go on, as well as the fluff. It's nice to see a Lois who's a bit more, ah, humble about things and less arrogant/self-centered than early show Lois. Though I get a feel there are reasons for that, since it's already been implied she had a fall from grace of some sort.
Martha certainly knows how to keep Lois busy/distracted and to take car eof Clark's well-being too.
As for BEss...I suspected her to be an animal, my guess was either a cow or a horse, and turned out to be right. I feel like there's more to the story with her and Clark than Martha told Lois. MAybe something she can't share bc it's related to his abilities, or maybe just an emotional/touchy subject. I'm sure we'll see.
I also find it interesting how Martha implies several times during their talk that the farm is essentially clark's/that he's the one in charge, not her. Did not expect that tbh. also, can one land-worker (Jack) rally make that much of a difference or is Clark merely using him as an alibi? Is he supering yet or not? I assume th elatter but we don't know yet.
Also, I'm curious to know what happened to Jon. I assumed he died but if it were just that I agree with Lois, there would be photos or memories or osmething. Hrm...did something ugly happened between M&J? Was he taken to protect CLark's secret or someting? Ah, so intriguing, that, but I'm sure whatever's the reason it's a sad one.
Nice Clois interactions. These two are warming up quickly to each other. And Martha obviously ships it.
Also, Clark using his powers to claim he had ot go to th ebarn just to be with her lol. He's so head-over-heels whether he realizes it yet or not.
And the mystery surrounding Jack also continues. Who's that guy? What's his connection to Lois? Why is he always away form the farm he works on? Ah, so many questions, which I'm sure will be unraveled with time, as is usually the case in all your fics.


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bakasi This Jack is not that Jack! Thanks for your feedback Bakasi.

Songbird You'll get some answers about Jonathan in Chapter 5. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Amanda Glad you're enjoying the journey. Sorry, I know nothing about music, including that song.

BlindPassenger Exactly, Lois from S1 was pretty sure of herself. This Lois has taken a few knocks. The real reason is that I didn't want to write something angsty - just a simple, fairly straightforward tale of a city girl falling for a farm boy.

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Hi Corrina!
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Next to her bed was a small nightstand, covered with a cloth embroidered with flowers. Her watch was there, alongside a lamp and a flashlight.
In the plus side: no chains!

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Seeing her handbag and suitcase positioned against the wall, she leapt from the bed, snatched her handbag, and rifled through it. Nothing was missing. Nothing had been touched.
Oh, poor dear! Also, poor dear, no unpack service in this establishment. Trip Advisor: one half star.

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Two aromas floated up the stairs, teasing her nostrils. Bacon… and coffee!
laugh

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But, as far as she could tell, these strangers hadn’t taken advantage of her vulnerability.
What’s *wrong* with them?

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She felt her cheeks heat a little, wondering what they must think of her.
That she’s one of them entitled city persons who just walk in and take over your place.

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She checked her watch. Almost seven o’clock. She’d slept for over two hours!
I thought it was five in the afternoon when she got captured by the farmboy?
Lois: What now?

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Breakfast?

Exactly how long had she slept?
See?

And given the remark on the shower…
Martha: Don’t worry, honey, our farm has a cow stable I have to visit daily.

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The last thing she could remember was being held against a broad chest. That, and a feeling of complete security.
Awww

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She had slept for almost fifteen hours!
Yup.

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And Martha’s note didn’t sound as if she resented uninvited guests appearing in her kitchen, falling asleep at her table, and needing to be carried to bed.
Martha: Clark finally got a girlfriend.

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Did Clark find it boring? What did he think about as he drove up and down those endless rows?
/makes shape of coke bottle before pointing at Lois/

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She had never been able to control her rampant curiosity.
Adorable!

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“Lois!” Martha greeted, turning from a sizzling pan on the stovetop. “You look so much better this morning.”
Awww…
/points at earlier remarks on cleanliness/

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“Good morning, Mrs Kent,” Lois said. “I can’t believe I slept all night. I’m sorry for causing you so much trouble.”
She didn’t. It’s as if she wasn’t even there.

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“I don’t know… I think if I went home without seeing him, I would always wonder.”
So much intrigue clap

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Talk it out with him. Find out where you stand… what he wants. You’ve travelled such a long way. And completely exhausted yourself.”

“It’s not… it’s not what you think.”
Not a boyfriend then? Clark still has a chance?

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“Can you carry all that?” Martha asked.

“Yes. It’s fine.”
You know, with the growling stomach, Lois won’t get away without one of the sandwiches and some coffee.

Martha: Clark usually has only two sandwiches… angel-devil

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His eyes shot into hers, deep and brown and soft, just as she had remembered them. “Yes?”
/points at title/

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Clark leaned against the back tractor tyre and ate his breakfast. His thoughts were not on food, but on Lois Lane.
Poor guy. Still convinced the city slicker is here to con his parents out of the farm so she can build one of ‘em strip malls?

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She was the most intriguing woman he had ever met.

Intriguing. Fascinating. Captivating.

Mysterious. Distant. Brilliant.

Strong. Vulnerable.

And beautiful. So very beautiful.

But…
Awwwwww

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The Lois Lane he imagined – the capable, talented, tenacious reporter for The Daily Planet – made it even more incongruous that she would be with Jack.
Has he *seen* how the reporters at the Daily Planet dress? Garish. Spandex. Revealing. And that’s just the men.

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What if Lois had discovered she was pregnant? With Jack’s child?
Now, Clark! She would be weepy and tired from all the hormones shooting through her body.

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Clark swallowed roughly. Jack was twenty-two, but sometimes he seemed more like a teenager. He was not ready for fatherhood.
/points at teenage pregnancies/

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Aw, Lois,” he murmured.
Oh boy. He’s gone off the deep end.

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Clark did have a second, marginally preferable scenario.
They were about to get married and Jack caught her with the Daily Planet gopher, Jimmy?

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Clark did have a second, marginally preferable scenario.

Lois could be following a lead for a story.
Slightly preferable because this scenario involves almost certain death?

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She’d come all this way to find Jack – it had to be something big.
She is the reason he got canned?

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To get to where she was in her career, Lois had had to be ruthless. If she were investigating Jack and she found something to publish, Clark doubted she would let a simple Kansas farmer and his mother get in the way of her story.
Wait a second. Where is Jonathan? You did not heart attack him, did you?

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His world was slow and repetitive and conventional. Tedious even.

Her world was fast-paced and modern and dynamic and exciting.

She was – in every way possible – out of his reach.
Funny how there was this joke about alien abduction scenarios on Discord just a few days ago…

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But that knowledge did nothing to still his heart or silence its assertion that Lois Lane was exactly the woman he had been waiting for his entire life.
He could ask her to stay and be his co-writer at the Smallville Gazette. Given her state of mind, she might take him up on it.

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“Bess has been the love of Clark’s life for a long time.”
Martha’s naughty!

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Is she Clark’s wife?”

“Oh no,” Martha said. “Clark isn’t married.”

“Bess is his girlfriend?”
evil

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Martha nodded slowly. “She means more to him than most people would be able to understand.”
Did she carry his pod when he arrived on Earth in a beaker?

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“There are the animals – they all get the best care we can give them. Then there are the special ones – the favourites. And then there’s Bess.”
Awww… just like with a King’s court. There were the girls he randomly took to bed, the favorite mistresses, and his one special lady. And then you had the wife.


/points at Lois/ She started it!
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Lois hadn’t known any sixteen-year-old boys who were enamoured by a cow.
Let’s just say Lana wasn’t pleased at being outclassed by a cow.

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But she didn’t mention Clark’s father. Or her husband. Or whether they were the same man.
/points at remark about Jonathan/

So, had Martha been abducted by aliens, fallen in love with a grieving Jor-El and now Clark is only half the Kryptonian he used to be?

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Martha wore a simple gold wedding band. Where was the man who had given her that ring?
Oh dear, Jonathan did experience a health crisis!

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On the mantlepiece, there were three photos – a tractor, a baby cow, and a garden of flowers.
Awww, Martha, Clark, and Jonathan.

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She’d said she’d lived in this house – and therefore, the local community – for almost forty years. Yet, it seemed to Lois that she was lonely.

Where were her friends? Her extended family? Did she have any other children?
What if Martha and Clark were ghostly apparitions?

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“Yes,” Martha said. “But he needs a break. If you take just his lunch, he’ll keep working while he eats. But if you’re eating too, he’ll have to stop.”
laugh

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We were expecting him to return today, but now he says he doesn’t know when he’ll be back.”
You’re evil, keeping Lois away from Metropolis like that. How can she meet Call-Me-Daniel that way? spider

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. If Jack were here, he could do the tractor work,
Lois knows how they drive and make tight corners.

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Home-made food, sunshine, taking time out from the morning’s work… it felt like a balm to her tormented soul.
Poor dear, she should ask Clark to make it permanent. Also, it feels a tad autobiographical? smile1

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Clark had been watching the back door of the farmhouse for over an hour. It was approaching lunchtime, but it wasn’t hunger that sparked his interest.
Awww, he’s adorable!

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He held up the bent screw. “I need to go to the barn to replace this part,” he said. “I’m glad I saved you the long trek to the far field.
He’s a sneaky one!

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Lois turned a little more towards him, and he desperately hoped she was about to open a conversation. “What is the most important thing to remember on a farm?” she asked.
huh
Always wear boots in the pig sty?

See you in a couple of days for part 3 smile1

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Hi Michael. Thanks for the fdk. Amusing and entertaining as always, Michael.

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/points at title/

Exactly! We know the destination. Hopefully the journey is enjoyable.


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Wait a second. Where is Jonathan? You did not heart attack him, did you?

No, I did not. smile


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Also, it feels a tad autobiographical?

Yes and no. I don't like research much, so writing what I know means I can concentrate on the LnC bits. I am a farmer, but I've never been a city girl falling for a farm boy!

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This is such a great introduction!

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...she leapt from the bed, snatched her handbag, and rifled through it. Nothing was missing. Nothing had been touched.
She jumped to the door and turned the knob. It opened easily. It had no locking device.
I feel like living in a major city teaches you to react exactly like this - such nice characterization!

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...but she never, ever let down her guard.
This time, she had.
I know this is a trope, but I'm just such a sucker for it - and it's used to such great effect here.

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That, and a feeling of complete security.
That's the dream!

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Did Clark find it boring? What did he think about as he drove up and down those endless rows?
I bet we've got an idea what he's thinking this morning!

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I think if I went home without seeing him, I would always wonder.”
I absolutely love that she's bemoaning her rampant curiosity and then a moment later leaning on it! That's perfect.

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“I have a suggestion.”
This interruption is such a fantastic Martha-ism.

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“Clark?”
His eyes shot into hers, deep and brown and soft, just as she had remembered them. “Yes?”
Awww. Is this the first time he's heard her say his name??? You can feel the electricity on the page here.

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A cow? A cow had helped Clark through tough times? “She’s pregnant?”
:rotfl: I love the dynamic here between inside thoughts an expressed thought.

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Very soon, all the bending, stretching, and squatting started to feel like a yoga class.
This is SO real - but even worse than yoga!

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Martha wore a simple gold wedding band. Where was the man who had given her that ring?
Oh noooooo.... this is going to be so tragic.

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“I can take it to him,” Lois offered, hoping she didn’t sound too eager.
Martha would have tracked that, even if she'd hidden it well!

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Clark had been watching the back door of the farmhouse for over an hour.
Oh, Clark. He's just so charmingly steadfast!

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He held up the bent screw. “I need to go to the barn to replace this part,” he said. “I’m glad I saved you the long trek to the far field.”
Sneaky!!!

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The gap between him and Lois yawned wide and impassable.
Just really lovely phrasing here.


I really like the very gentle unraveling of the mystery of Jack, and also of whatever triad it is that's given her such heartbreak. Looking forward to reading more!

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Hi Corrina!
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Yes and no. I don't like research much, so writing what I know means I can concentrate on the LnC bits. I am a farmer, but I've never been a city girl falling for a farm boy!
So, no super hero, naive work partner, and third-richest criminal in the world vying for your charms?

But yeah, I was going for the farming-/homespun-stuff smile1

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JadedEvie Thanks for your feedback!

I have KathyB to thank for the 'nice characterization' you mentioned. She thought my original Lois wasn't suspicious enough.

I enjoyed your insight about Martha and also describing Clark as 'charmingly steadfast'. He is!

Michael

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So, no super hero, naive work partner, and third-richest criminal in the world vying for your charms?

But yeah, I was going for the farming-/homespun-stuff

No (to the first bit) although the superspeed and the superstrength of the super hero would make farming a lot easier.

And yes to the second. smile

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No (to the first bit) although the superspeed and the superstrength of the super hero would make farming a lot easier.
laugh And allow for more writing time wink

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