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From Chapter 14

As Martha put the cookies in the oven, Lois heard the sound of a car engine approaching. It stopped at the front of the house. “Someone’s here,” Martha said as she quickly washed and dried her hands. “Wouldn’t it be wonderful if it were Jack?”

Lois listened intently as Martha walked to the front door and opened it.

“Lana!” she said, sounding pleased. “And Levi! Come in.”


Thanks for reading!

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So sweet!!!! This is probably the most soft and innocent I’ve seen Lois written, and it’s all about Clark and the farm life! Makes you wonder how someone’s environment influences personality!

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*melts* I love this story so much! The Lois and Clark in this story are different but still the Lois and Clark that we all love. Lois kissing Clark on the cheek at the end was sweet. I was expecting Clark to start floating! I can’t wait for more! Thank you for sharing this gem with us!

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I'm beginning to wonder how you'll resolve this. It is this just the first act of a series of stories? It's clear that they're both in love with each other, but so far it doesn't seem to lead anywhere. This was such a wonderful date.


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Aw, what a cute date. Well, not-date if you ask them but still. Now who's gonna tell them they are totally dating LOL
Aaand the War Guy is back! Way to go jerk. Wonder why he's so obsessed to get Clark into his team given Clark makes it so clear he doesn't want to write for him and his journalistic style doesn't match what Guerra wants anyway. There seems to be more to this, maybe more than Clark shared, or an extra motive involved.
Oh these two are so soft for each other...The ice cream is certainly not the only thing that melts here.
Ah, decisions-decisions...
So Lois has.Will she take it...or will she instead go the farm route...and what about Clark's two desires?
I mean, with his powers and such, he *could* do both, in theory, I assume...if he really wants. But I'd imagine that to be super stressy even for him, and hard to explain, so probably not.
Either way, I feel like at the end of this road, one or both will have to sacrifice certain things in order to get/keep others, regardless of the outcome.
The blanket feels warm? Well Lois, that happenes when your personal farmboy heat-visions it for you...
Still enjoy the read. It's a bit different than your other stories (though it's hard to say why) but still very much an FH fic in many regards. I'm unsure how you're going to resolve (or at least part-resolve) this in just three more parts given the relative slow pace (which is in tune with the setting though) we have here. Well, we will find out, I assume.


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Hello! Just catching up on this amazing story and eagerly waiting for the next part!

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Yay for this chapter!

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Desperate, Lois said, “If you could ask me anything, what would it be?”
She’d caught him unawares. “I… I don’t know.”
“Sure you do. Anything.”
“Maybe here isn’t the right place,” he said.
...what was the question??? I'm just dying to know. Was it in the vein of 'could you ever live on a farm, love a farmboy, accept an alien?'

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“Bess just happens to have the best milk in the world.”
This is too sweet.

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“You’ll do it? You’re the machine?”
So cute! lol

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“You must be frustrated that Jack isn’t here.”
“You're here.”
Awww.

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She stopped half an inch from touching his pinkie finger. He lifted his finger and closed the distance, resting his finger against hers.
This is such a perfect little microcosm event because they're both just inching closer, both making the choice - it feels like them!

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“I had to come back eventually,” he said. “And there’s no one I’d rather be with.”
Ooooh! That feels like a big admission!

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“I called Perry this afternoon,” Lois said.
Way to bury a lead!

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When he did, she held his gaze and said, “I thought we agreed we weren’t going to make any decisions yet.”
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His grin became more natural. “Depends on who’s offering.”
It's moments like this where I can't tell if this is the character's flirting or the author's red herring. It's a fun balance!

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She laughed. “You won’t believe this, but the blanket feels warm.”
Love the little dramatic irony of this!

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They were talking about Jack, but Lois wondered how closely Clark could relate.
It's a really nice analogy that you set up here!

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Did his dream of working for The Daily Planet still flicker under the accumulation of grief and responsibility?
I just love the way you crafted this phrase.

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“Both farming and journalism require a lot of dedication, and it’s too much for one person? Is that what you’re saying?”
This equation gets a lot more interesting if she stays and there are two of them...

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His mind was full of Lois.
Awwwww. love

Looking forward to finding the time to read the rest!!

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Hi Corrina!

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“About lunch time.”

She nodded, and silence loomed again. Desperate, Lois said, “If you could ask me anything, what would it be?”
Awww…kwardness!

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That was easy. “Chocolate. With ice-cream a close second.”

He smiled at that. “Good.”

“Why?”

He shrugged slightly. “Good choice.”
He got a chocolate surprise for her?

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To us. Lois caught the words before they escaped. “To hay,” she said. “And sunshine.”
Oooh! The Hayseed and Little Miss Sunshine clap

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“I drive the truck along the rows and… Do you have some sort of machinery to pick up the bales?”
Yes. Bio-robot.

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“Will you teach me how to work it?”
/Sputters/
Hmm…
/Heads over yonder for next part/

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Well, that further explained how he got all those muscles. Dragging her mind away from the image that wanted to form in her mind, Lois said, “Then we drive to the barn and…”
angel-devil

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but she’d seen enough to trust that Clark had it all in hand.
Literally.

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“I’m not sure I am as useful as Jack would be.”
She is more useful. In some ways much more useful.

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“I had to come back eventually,” he said. “And there’s no one I’d rather be with.”
Awwww

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Lois smiled softly, he responded, her heart danced a little.
/Imagines it doing the robot/

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Actually, it felt better than any date she’d ever had.
It’s because she knows that only she feels that way and thus there is no expectations on her date’s part about how the evening would continue.
LOIS: whinging

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Tracey arrived with two plates. She glanced to the table, her gaze resting a moment on the spot where Lois’s finger was almost touching Clark’s.
This is going to go into The Smallville Morning as a page one headline.

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“Yes. You were right about that, too. He asked when I’ll be back.”

Clark didn’t look too pleased about being right. “What did you say?”
laugh

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“You’re not leaving tomorrow?”

“Of course not! I have hay to bale!”
rotflol
Plus, she still has to crack that rumor about misappropriation of dark subsidiaries.

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He smiled at that. Was he pleased because he would have help with the hay? Or some other reason?
Let’s … go with option two.

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Lois told of some of her more interesting stories and the characters she’d met when chasing those stories.
CLARK: she’s okay. She survived. She’s unhurt.

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Name your own price. Your own working conditions.
CLARK: Lois Lane!

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“I’ve been very patient,” Mr Guerra said. “I’ve waited for- “
I’m…not sure this is how you do headhunting.

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“I’ve been patient, too, Mr Guerra,” Clark said, “but now I have to ask you to leave because you’re interrupting my dinner and being rude to my guest.”
See?

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His grin became more natural. “Depends on who’s offering.”
So, offers for payment in kind for letting her stay on the farm is not off the table?

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“You can’t keep working full days with interrupted sleep every night.”

“I’m OK.”
She’s used to irregular sleep cycles? Also, they meet in his room instead? After supper?

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“To the barn?”

“To the barn.”
Awwww

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The ground ahead was slightly rough and dimly lit, and she was wearing heels. That was excuse enough to keep her hand in his.
LOIS: What? He does not know what sort of stuff I do in heels in Metropolis angel-devil

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Except, it wasn’t really a date. It wasn’t about being together. It was about trying to find out if Lana wanted to marry Clark.
And sharing a haybale in Clark’s barn is definitely required to find this out.

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It was about preparing the townspeople for the news that the anticipated wedding would not happen.
Again, sharing hot chocolate inside Clark’s barn was essential to that.

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She didn’t speak as she ate the ice-cream. It was good enough to demand her full attention. She swallowed the last mouthful and sighed.
laugh

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“Yes.” She laughed. “You won’t believe this, but the blanket feels warm.”

“Tired?” he asked.
You know, for a moment I thought Clark might have warmed it. But he did not indicate so to Lois so it must all be in my mind.

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“We don’t know if he is looking for his father,” she said. “But we know he left his established life to experience something different. What if he meets a girl and falls in love? What if he tries a different job and discovers he loves it far more than milking cows?”
Then Clark will need to get a new farmhand. Or work twice as fast.

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If Clark were to leave the farm, to pursue his dreams in journalism… what would happen to the Farm Boy?
Depends. Would he get partnered with a hardnosed city slicker or would he be left to his own devices and get to report on the most marvelous dog and pony shows in town?

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“Thanks,” he said, sounding relieved. “Do you still feel that… compulsion… that need to know everything about everything?”
She still breathing?

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“He doesn’t care much for truth. Or fairness. He just cares about sensationalised headlines and selling newspapers. That makes him volatile.”
But…but…but this is *Smallville*!

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“That’s exactly what I’m saying. I would love to be a reporter, but the price is to give up farming. And that’s a price I’m not willing to pay.”
Oh boy. Maybe… he could farm sources?

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Leaving the farm meant leaving Clark.

That was going to be difficult.

She would miss Clark.

And Martha.

And the farm.

Even Bess and Daisy.

But mostly Clark.
Oh dear, oh dear!

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As they walked out of the barn, Lois slipped her hand into his. His heart leapt as he gently enclosed his fingers around her hand.

“The ground is a bit rough for heels,” she said.
Yes.

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Should he kiss her?

He wanted to… obviously.

But more, he didn’t want to do anything that would spoil what had, so far, been a perfect evening.

Claude had betrayed her badly. What Lois needed most was people she could trust.

By the time they reached the landing, Clark had decided he wouldn’t kiss her.
Huh. So, will Lois?

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Her head was tilted up, looking at him.
Not expecting a kiss at all, is she?
LOIS: Clark didn’t kiss me sad confused

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Her mouth was just a few inches away. He looked into her eyes, hoping there would be clear indication of what she wanted. They were soft and warm, but if there was a message there, all of Clark’s powers were not sufficient to decipher it.
/hands Clark a dictionary/

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His mind was full of Lois.

Holding her hand.

Sharing her smile.

And that kiss.
Awwwwww

See you in part 14!

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