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Chapter 5

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Sorry I'm so slow on posting this, especially since it's already written! I'll try to do better!

Let me know what you think about Martha here. She's so unsure, but she's so wonderful and exactly what Clark needs. And Jonathan is a rock.

<3

Thanks for reading!
-Bek

OHH, I think I've said this on previous chapters, but I hope he gets to stay with Martha and Jonathon!!
I couldn't bear it if he gets taken away from them after everything he has been through....😭
He needs them as much as they need him.

more soon.... yes??

Awwww, poor Martha! So glad Jonathan is being strong right now, though I imagine at some point Martha will need to be strong for him due to all of this. That's why they're so great together :3.

Can't wait for more!

I love the Martha / Jonathan moments, they compliment each other so well. I think it absolutely makes sense that Martha would doubt herself- anyone would, and that adds to her humanity. Funnily enough, I just scrolled past some writing advice that went along the lines of- If you have a confident character, let them doubt, if your character is a caring sibling, let them have a disagreement, etc. Can be taken too far of course, yet its absence entirely it is also odd. Martha has ultimate mom-status, but that doesn't mean she doesn't ever flounder even a little bit. The ability to question yourself leads to the humbleness to be open to learning.

But anyway rant aside, I am so utterly addicted to this fic, I like how Clark is gradually warming up, figuring out he could have strawberries, MY HEART!

I love how Martha is overwhelmed with the situation, but Jonathan reassures her loving Clark and being patient with him will be enough.

I loved the Martha/Jonathan interactions. They are so well in completing each other.
I think it's perfectly normla that Martha has all the insecurities. This if a new and terrifying situation for her as much as it is for Clark, albeit for other reasons. And her being so afraid she could do anything wrong is just more proof how much seh cares.
Clark is still in sensation that these people, GASP!, seem to CARE about him and what he wants. Weird though, that, how can they?
Aaand they slowly start to crack his shell. Seems like food esp. desserts is a love language for every Clark/Kal of yours, huh?
So, Martha takes care of Clark, Jon takes care of the papers and stuff. Yay for Work sharing!
Also, random thought: I was wondering, since this Clark will def need a lot of comfort and such, whether Finn is gonna show up in this one too, but apparently not.?
So, Mrs. Jones is next, I assume. That should be an...interesting visit for everyone involved.
Still enjoying this (like it's super sad but also there's hope...)