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From Chapter 15...

The sound of the phone cut across his thoughts. Clark moved to the phone with his lightning fast speed to stop it from waking his Mom or disturbing Lois, wondering who could be calling at such a late hour.

“Clark Kent,” he said.

“Clark, it’s Jack. There’s rain coming.”

“Yes, I know.”

“I’ll be there first thing tomorrow to help you bring it in.”


Thanks for reading!

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I’ve been checking a couple of times every day for an update and I was thrilled to see you posted today! Thank you! Thank you! It was worth the wait.

I loved this chapter, especially the discussion between Lois and Lana. It was very enlightening. I’m
glad Lana doesn’t want to marry Clark and that she’s concerned with Clark’s happiness too. I’m still hoping Lois eventually becomes a permanent farm girl. It’s going to be fun to see what happens.

So Jack is coming back. It will be interesting to see what Lois decides to do and if Jack is her half brother.

I’m thoroughly enjoying this story! It’s beautifully written and I love the way you write the characters. They’re different but still the same - if that makes sense. I can’t wait for the next chapter! I love this story so much!

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Loved the conversation between Lois and Lana. Can't wait to see what happens next.


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I’m feeling a little sad that Martha believes so absolutely Clark would never leave farming. I mean, maybe she’s right, but Lois is also right: What would Clark do if he weren’t toiling under the weight of duty? I want Clark to have a real choice, just like Lois is gearing up to have a real choice. I’m also wondering if Clark is going to take 20 minutes and haul in the rest of the bales and if so, what will Lois’ reporter mind do with the knowledge of his impossible speed.

Great chapter!

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I'm so glad that there's nothing romantic about Lana's feelings for Clark (Smallville scarred me for life whenever Lana is mentioned grumble).

I feel sorry for Clark. He likes living on the farm, but I believe this is not what he dreamed for his life (or he wouldn't have gotten a Journalism degree). I feel like he doesn't even dare to wish for something different because he worries about his mother and doesn't want to leave her alone. It's like the situation with Lana: he was willing to marry her though he didn't love her, just because this is what people expected him to do. He always thinks of other people's needs and not his own. While this is noble, it is sad that he only does what is best for others but never for himself. sad

It looks like Lois will have to make a decision soon. I hope she doesn't give it up on her feelings for Clark. grovel

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So. Lois and Lana talked it out. And Lana is...pulling Lois into Clark's direction. Either because she really wants to use her as a "shield" between her and Clark, so she doesn't need to make a definite decision for herself, or because she realizes these tow have something for each other. Probably both. These two (Lana an dClark) def get a lot of pressure from outside folks of whome it's absolutely not their business but who cares? That's part of the downsides of living in a small town, I assume. But people can crack under it if its getting too much even if its not healthy.
Interesting, Lois still wants to go home but still has not decided when and how. Seems like at this point, she's a bit fooling herself. Cause if she really wanted to leave, she'd probably done at this point. I feel like deep down, seh knows she nedds to make a decision between her work/carreer at the Planet and staying with Clark, but I do think she hasn't totally realized that yet. She's getting closer to that realization though.
Oh, Clark would absolutely be able to get all the hay in the barn and other stuff...but he won't because some people could see it as suspicious. THat must be so frustrating.
Hmm, looks like Clark is getting a little sloppy with his powers around Lois, here and there, to make it more comfortoble for her. And Lois also notices small things ar eoff. Now, in a world tha thas not seen a Superman or anything like that yet, "That guy has powers" won't be her conclusion, obviously, but it's also Lois. Sooner or later, there will be...a consequence of some kind if Clark continues that road.
I feel bad for Clark, that he basically has "no choice" because he feels so responsible for the farm he won't even allow himself to explore other options. Not that I think he dislikes being a farmer, far form it, but this Clark certainly shows a habit to always do what others expect/want from him and priorize it over his own wishes to an extent. I fel ultimately, it should have been his choice, I'm with the others on this - but I also get that life sometimes just doesn't work like that.
What, only two more chapters? I'm seriously not sure how you're gonna close evrything up in just two more chapters. Well, guess we'll find out.

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Martha is still grieving for her husband and the life she once had. Still, that's no reason for Clark to give up on the life he wants. As was mentioned by Ultra Woman, he did not spend four years getting a degree in journalism only to live on a farm in Smallville.

Perhaps Clark can move to Metropolis while Jack takes care of the farm?

Lana.

Ouch! Whenever I hear that name I immediately think she's going to be difficult and demanding, happily she is not. So glad she isn't interested in marrying Clark just so he can take care of her and Levi. Honestly, doesn't he get a choice in this case as well?

Corrina, how are you going to resolve all this with only two parts remaining? Looking forward to those next installments.


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Had to take a break, but I'm so glad to be getting to this chapter!

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“Yes, it was great,” Lois replied, careful to pat down any stray tendrils of enthusiasm.
Perfect instinct for Lois here, and also so comedic since we know that Martha will know better!

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“If the editor was someone else, someone more aligned with Clark’s values, do you think he would consider it?” Lois asked, keeping her tone casual.
“I doubt it.”
Little heartbreak! wallbash

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In truth, it was hard to know what Clark actually wanted because he was so intent on not failing in his responsibilities.
I love that you're concentrating so much on this character trait. It makes so much sense here and is so true to form.

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“Lana!” she said, sounding pleased. “And Levi! Come in.”
The plot thickens! Wow, Lana's must have her finger on the pulse of the small town gossip!

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“It seems everyone is talking about that. The only two people not talking about that are Clark and me.” She looked at Lois with troubled eyes. “I don’t want to hurt Clark. He’s been hurt enough. If he really wanted to marry me, if he thought that was best, I would marry him.”
So complicated. And poor Lana. whinging

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“I was so excited when I heard he took you out last night. I have been terrified he would come and propose to me.”
So glad Lois is here because, like, has NO ONE asked Lana what she wants? And, of course, they haven't. I've seen this sort of thing before, but it's so sad. Such a very real detail about this close-knit communities.

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“But it’s something Clark would do – put his own chance at real happiness aside so Levi could have a father and I could have someone to look after us.”
Ooof, another little heartbreak.

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“If you do decide to stay, I’d like to be friends,” she said.
But Lois wasn’t going to stay. “I’d like that, too,” she said.
Aw, Lana. And I think this is the moment I'm going to start rooting for Lois to give up Metropolis, instead of Clark giving up the farm. I don't know what you have planned, and I suspect I'll be over the moon for whatever you end up writing, but I think I'm throwing my hat in the ring in favor of Smallville, since so many of these relationships rely so much on Clark in ways we don't usually see. And it's easy to see how Lois fits in.

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It should have made things simpler.
But somehow, it didn’t.
love But I can just imagine the absolute FIT she'd end up throwing if Lana was interested in chasing Clark, lol.

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He was so, so excited about seeing her again. He had thought about nothing else as he had driven the tractor and baler along row after row of raked hay. The anticipation was exquisite.
Awwwwww!

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Lois was there. She looked up from the tomatoes and smiled, melting his heart and squeezing the breath from his lungs.
Double aww!

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“I don’t need to rest. How heavy are the bales?”
Good girl!

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“You are only to do the first, second and third layers. Don’t lift them any higher. I’ll do that.”
“OK,” Lois said, not sure if she would obey.
lol Love every part of this! SO fun the way you apply their character traits to this totally different scenario that we see them at the Planet in the series.

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"I did it that way last year.”
Of course, he had… right around the time his father had passed away.
She had to try to protect him from those memories. Or at least be there so he didn’t have to remember alone. “I’m coming, too,” she said firmly.
Very astute of her. I love this detail.

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“You won’t hit me,” he said.
She wasn’t sure that anyone could be fine after the amount of physical work he had done today. “Are you sure?”
This is a really sweet navigation on both of their ends.

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Who would have thought that chasing down a story and storing away hay would produce similar feelings?
Yaaaaaas, Lois, come to the farm life....

Great chapter! The tension between the hay and the rain feels very real!

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Hi Corrina!
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“Yes, it was great,” Lois replied, careful to pat down any stray tendrils of enthusiasm.
Yes, always make sure the campfire is out, or you might get a raging inferno.

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“If the editor was someone else, someone more aligned with Clark’s values, do you think he would consider it?” Lois asked, keeping her tone casual.
And Clark could even commute!

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Lois heard the tinge of anxiety in Martha’s voice. “But you don’t think my help will be enough to get all the hay in?”

“No. But he’ll get in what he can.”
peep

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Did he regret the time lost yesterday, finishing early to prepare for their date?

Had he thought about their date?

Did he consider it a date?
clap

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How did he feel about her kissing him?
Cooties!

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“I… Do you mind if I stay here with Lois?” Lana asked.
Oh boy peep

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“Can you watch the cookies please?”

“Ah… yes,” Lois said. “How will I know when to take them out?”
Lana’s there. And now I wonder if Martha signaled Lana to make an excuse, so the cookies are watched.

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“They’ll be just starting to brown.”
/Shows Lois lump of coal/ *this* is too much browning.

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Lois figured that if Lana could ask direct questions, so could she. “Do you want to marry Clark?”
laugh also shock

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Lana twitched a little in surprise. Then she smiled softly. “That is the impossible question.”
laugh

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. If he really wanted to marry me, if he thought that was best, I would marry him.”
Oooookay? So…Lois is free to … mix and mingle with Clark?

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. “I was so excited when I heard he took you out last night. I have been terrified he would come and propose to me.”
laugh clap

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“I can’t stay here. Not for much longer. I have… a job, a life. I have to get back.”
And it’s not like Clark is a piece of seashell she can pocket and take with her.

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“You don’t love Clark?” Lana asked, looking disappointed.

“I… well… I hardly know him.”
That wasn’t the question.

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“I don’t want to interfere,” Lana said. “But can’t you see he’s a great guy? He’s perfect. And gorgeous. And his body…” She giggled. “Have you ever seen him with his shirt off?”
Aaah, she doesn’t love him in the Lois way, but in the Cat way.

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“Have you ever seen him with his shirt off?”

“Ah… no.”

“Pity,” she said. “He’s spectacular.”
rotflol

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“I would be so grateful,” Lana said. Suddenly, she jumped up. “The cookies! We almost forgot them!”
There’s still time. The local fire brigade has not yet been notified by the neighbors. Also, what did you expect, with Lois in the kitchen!

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And why was it so hard to think about leaving?
I’m still waiting for Lois to milk Bessie so I can use this fic in the December scavenger hunt.

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That their worlds were too far apart for anything to be possible between them.
Yes, but once she knows, she can spend her days getting into trouble and her nights getting rescued by a commuting Clark.

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“Clark!” she said, standing up. “Did something go wrong? I was expecting you an hour ago.”

“Nothing went wrong,” he said. “I just decided to bale a bit more.”
You do not leave a lone Lois waiting. Bad(TM) things happen.

Also, he was considering whether to bail some more. peep

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“Drive slowly between the rows. I will throw the bales onto the tray and the trailer. Sometimes I’ll need to get aboard to stack them.”
It is important she focuses on the trail and not the robot’s physique.

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“I’ll throw them up into the loft.”

“What can I do?”
Stare in wonder. Don’t tell the other farmers.

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“I don’t need to rest. How heavy are the bales?”

“Forty-five to fifty pounds.”
Oh, that’s not too heavy. Somehow I thought of the 3m diameter, 1m thick cylindrical shaped type common over here.

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He wasn’t convinced. “Lois, I can’t stand the thought of you doing anything too hard for you.”
It’s a bale of hay. She’s used to three times that weight hanging off her fingers while she waits for Henderson to show up and pull her back onto the roof.

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Lois put her hand on his arm. “Can I help if I promise to stop the moment it gets too heavy?”
Trick question!

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“OK,” Lois said, not sure if she would obey.
rotflol

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Otherwise, the twine will tear your hands to shreds.”

“Why aren’t you wearing gloves?”

“Because I do this a lot.”
Hmm…

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Lois watched him, remembering what Lana had said about seeing him without a shirt. She could easily imagine the effect this hard physical labour would have had on his physique.
laugh actually, It’s from relaxing in the sun. Also, this is the main reason why Clark had stopped hiring women as farm hands. They always got distracted while he was baling hay and then accidents happened.

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By the third load, Lois was tiring, but Clark hadn’t noticeably slowed. He seemed to be working faster to decrease the number of bales she hauled.

As they drove into the barn with the fourth load, Clark said, “Would you go and get us some lemonade please?”
He’s not going to finish this on his own and play all innocent, is he?

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Lois agreed, trying not to show she was a little relieved. When she got back to the barn with their drinks and more of Martha’s cookies, Clark was coming down the ladder and the truck was empty.
angel-devil

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“Wow, you were quick!” Lois exclaimed. “Aren’t you getting tired?”

He took the glass of lemonade. “Thanks,” he said. “I’ll drive back to the next field. You stay here and rest.”
Doesn’t want to lie, does he?

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“I’m driving,” she said firmly. “Finish your lemonade, and let’s get this hay into the barn.”

“Lois…”

“How did you get it unloaded so fast?”
Aaand we go driving!

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“Yes. But it’s too dark to see you. I’m worried it’s too dangerous for you to be near a moving truck in the dark. What if you get caught between the truck and the trailer?”
Then he’ll have to fix the twisted axle.

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She also experienced a kind of elation she’d only previously felt after nailing a big story.
Awwww

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Who would have thought that chasing down a story and storing away hay would produce similar feelings?
Same mystery to uncover.

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Five minutes later, she stepped under the hot stream and figured she had probably never felt anything quite so wonderful.
So , about that bit of nookie the author never promised or implied…?

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