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Well, that's the end of Story 1.

Many thanks to KathyB for her patience with my sporadic efforts to put together a story and her insightful comments that always brought improvement.

There will be a significant wait for Story 2. I've barely started writing, although the plot is in place.

Thanks for the welcome back to the boards. It's been fun!

Corrina.

What a terrific final chapter. It's so great to see them admit their love for each other. And that kiss...

Poor Clark. It must be so hard on him to know that at one point he's got to jump this huge secret on her. I hope the two of them will work something out.

Thanks for a great final chapter! I’m glad Lois and Clark finally admitted their feelings for each other. Those two can make anything happen, including finding their happily ever after.

Their kiss was wow!! If they didn’t have incentive before to make things work, they sure do now! I’m glad it ended on a hopeful, positive note.

I love this story and can’t wait for the sequel. I know you won’t be posting it any time soon but I promise to be patient. Thanks! Good things are worth waiting for!

I've really enjoyed following this. Thanks for sharing.

Such a sweet ending. Still so much they need to work out but for now they have each other. And we have more to look forward to. Can't wait for the sequel.

I loved this! Hopefully the wait is not too long for the next one… one of my favorite authors waited 16 yrs before posting a sequel to one of her stories… Come in under that and I’ll be happy!

There are many obstacles ahead. But we know, this duo is more than capable of handling them. I hope the sequel comes soon.

I loved this version of our favorite couple. I had read the first chapter or two when it was first posted. Then waited to read the rest when I saw the final chapter was complete (at least for this story). I hated that I had to work today, as it got in the way of reading and my enjoyment of this story. I'm glad they finally let their feelings for each other show. They've got a lot ahead of them to work out. Hopefully lessons learned on the farm will help them realize they make a great team. That two halves make a whole. I'm definitely down for the sequel, whenever it may be.

Sarah

Aaand the hay is all in the barn! Applause to all three of them for making it just in time!
Also, we get some steps into, well, lets call it "romantic terrain" finally made by Lois and Clark. Baby steps, that is.
Cause they are right: Lois is (and wants to remain) an investigative big city rpeorter, while Clark is (and wants to reman) a Kansas farmer. Granted, Lois finds farming fascinating and Clark has an interest in journalism...but that doesn't solve things.
Hrm, maybe they can do something like in Aussie Rules with a place share kind of deal? As in, living in SV during main Farming season, and in MEtropolis for the other half of the time? OF course, unlike in AR, Lois doesn't know about Clark's powers this time around (yet) and this Clark is incredible fearful of telling her, so that make sit harder cause that might solve some (albeit not all) of their problems.
Hrm, I'm also curious in how far the fact Jack being Lois' half-brother will influence things there.

All-in-all, I liked this story. It was not one of your best, IMO (there are some where the plot was much more captivating me/the topics were more of my interest), but that doesn't mean it wasn't a nice read. It was neat to read you again here.
I'm still a little unsure what to think about Lois warming up to the world of farming that quickly and completely - though I assume a lot of this has more to do with Clark than th eactual farming stuff, to a good extent. There were also a few somewhat repetitive elements throughout the story, or so I felt (though, I guess some of this is semi-natural given the location, cause that's kinda part of the farm life)

Anyway, I'm looking forward to when you feel ready to share Part II of this work with us. Have a good time!

Such a sweet end! I'm happy that there's going to be a sequel, because this story is too good to stop here. Hopefully it won't take so long.

Andreia

I can feel how much you love and respect farmers and that life.

Absolutely adorable!

You have such skill with showing how embracing the simple things in life can bring joy. This is something that infuses all of your other work, and you've lost none of it during the years you've been busy with things besides writing. Your stories always remind me emotionally to slow down and really pay attention to the things in life that I love. My moms smile when I hug her, how much I enjoy my morning tea, a beautiful turn of phrase in something I'm reading.

These 2 have a lot of challenges still to work through (when don't they? Lol), but they too have found the most important thing in life: connection with each other and others around them.

I'm looking forward to what you have for them next!