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Things don't look promising, but I'm glad the Loises stopped bickering and are working together. They have a better chance working together than separated. But I wonder how long they will be able to handle the tension. If they don't find a solution soon, it must to take a toll on all of them.

Looking foward to where this is going.

Andreia


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~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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Thank you. It’s very difficult for Loïs to share

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This is such an interesting concept! So much better than the whole clone arc.


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I hate the arc of clone. Lex it’s difficult and after Dr Deter 😤

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“I don’t think your articles for the afternoon edition are on my desk. Either get back to work or you’re fired!”

Perry loves instilling fear into the bullpen.

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Just as Ultrawoman was about to ask a follow-up question, Jimmy knocked and entered the conference room without waiting for a reply. Ultrawoman, having removed her mask when she was crying, quickly turned to hide her uncovered face.

Jimmy!

Glad to see them working as a team. Having UltraWoman step in for Superman while he is on a secret missions is brilliant!


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Chapter 9:
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Since the beginning of this ordeal, he had put aside his own emotions to protect *his* women with all his might. But deep down, this situation was hard for him as well. The situations Ultrawoman faced every day demanded extraordinary mental strength and the ability to shield oneself from others’ distress. Clark had taken time to understand this reality. The Superman costume, much more than just a suit, acted as a shell that allowed him to endure pain and sorrow. Although he was frequently moved by what he encountered, returning to Lois and his life as a journalist allowed him to unload his feelings and prepare for the next rescue.

Very well written. Clark is right, being in the suit is like a 'shield' from distress. Unfortunately, it takes time to develop and harden that shell. Poor Lois has been thrown into the deep end of the ocean. Thankfully, she has a great support system at home.


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Yes, that's exactly what I mean; a professional posture helps protect against many things. And Clark, in the Superman costume, operates differently—more confident, more assertive...

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Chapter 8

Glad I'm finally able to get back to reading this story!

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Meanwhile, Lois continued searching the apartment for clues. She listened to the exchange between her husband and Ultrawoman and realized she wasn't at all jealous of the special connection they shared. She didn’t feel threatened by their relationship. She realized that all her insecurities and anxieties had vanished when her body was split into two. Ultrawoman had inherited the powers but also all the "negative" aspects of Lois’s personality—the Lois who needed reassurance, comfort, the Lois who was starved for love, the Lois she was before Clark. Meanwhile, Lois retained her confidence in herself, in her relationship, and in her husband. She understood that she hadn’t lost anything in this duplication. If they remained this way, Lois would hardly be affected. Sure, her husband wouldn't be "super" anymore, but that was almost a plus—after all, she wouldn’t have to share him with the world. She’d still have her job at the Planet, alongside Clark, her social status, a "normal" life. But Ultrawoman wouldn't be legitimate in the job she had devoted her life to, wouldn’t be able to go out to dinner with Clark; in short, she would be excluded from her own life. No wonder she was terrified of the situation.

Ultra Lois has every right to be terrified! Lois and Clark have a life, but she is only living as a superhero and pretty much nothing else. For some reason this story reminds me of Labrat's excellent fic, Masques. If you have not read it, please do. Amazing story.

I noticed earlier that Ultra Lois does have all of Lois' negative aspects. Let's hope that as time goes on she is able to rein those feelings in.

World War II? The plot thickens!


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In fact Ultrawoman have just the negative aspects because she has the "Bad side", she does'nt exist. She's just a superhero, she's not married, she does'nt work AT the Planet...

In the other hand, Loïs win in this duplication, her husband stay Always with her


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