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Sorry for the delay. I was struck down by a cold for a bit. I feel for Clark. It must be so hard to lose everything, including his name. And then he's experiencing exhaustion on a regular basis, which must be new to him, too.

You write this so well.

Off to read the next chapter.


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Hello Bakasi!

Clark is facing many changes and challenges. The people of New Krypton and looking for a warrior prince, not a mild-mannered reporter for Metropolis. It is overwhelming, but Mr. Kent will deal with the challenges. His Earth name is one of those challenges. But with each visit to New Krypton we will see how he adapts.

Enjoy the next chapter!


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I feel for Clark. He doesn’t have an easy road ahead but even without his powers, he’s strong. He’s given up everything to help the Kryptonians with no guarantee he’ll ever return to Lois and his parents. It’s a huge sacrifice but Clark has always been willing to make sacrifices. I can understand, however, why it’s so hard for him to give up his name. He’ll get through this and maybe this experience will make him an even better Superman when he returns to Lois and his parents (I’m hoping).

Thanks for a terrific story! I love it!

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The voyage from Earth to New Krypton took four weeks.
I can't imagine being stuck on a plane for this long. lol

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It was baffling to him that such an advanced civilization relied so strongly upon out-moded traditions.
It's funny how Krypton society mirrors ours this way sometimes. Very topical!

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It was unfortunate that their future happiness was to be sacrificed to this war as much as his and Lois’.
So sad!

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The language classes were the most intriguing. They unlocked words and phrases buried deep in the subconscious mind that he must have heard as an infant.
This is such a cool detail!

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He prayed in the time that Zara and the others had been on Earth, Nor and his followers had not wrested control of the government.
That would be such a hard thing to learn upon arrival!

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During his days as Superman, Clark had lovingly observed another planet, now several thousand light years away. His mind caressed the delicate sapphire and emerald jewel hanging in space that had once been his home and hopefully would soon be again.
This is so sweet and nostalgic.

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“My name is Clark.” He said stubbornly, “Clark Kent.”
Good for him!

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Zara lowered her eyes and said with a tenderness he had never heard before, “Would it be enough if in private the three of us agree to use the Terran name of Clark?”
That's sweet of her to make this happen. I feel like she knows that he doesn't really know what he'll be walking into.

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Clearing her throat, she said calmly, “You have a grandmother, Lady Polara Lo. She is the maternal head of her house.”
I love that he has more family here! I feel like it's what he's wanted most.

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“What kind of person is Lady Polara?”
An actual smile lit Zara’s face.
Aw. I love that Zara likes his grandmother! It's also such a good set-up for Polara.

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Oh yes, she still holds a champion’s rank.
This is such a cool character trait!

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Yet some of it felt more like forced indoctrination.
It feels like that's exactly what Trey and Zara want. But the better he pulls it off, the sooner he can go home.

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