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This is more of an interlude chapter, time Lois and Clark are together, yet apart.

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Oh 🥺 I feel so much pain for them; I sometimes wonder if it isn’t even harder to have a holographic message than a letter. The need to touch each other must be unbearable.

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I love that she's even yelling at his holographic image. It must be so hard on Lois to watch Clark's transformation into a warrior. How will this affect them once Clark can return, assuming that is what will happen eventually? I sure hope it does. Like Aurore, I hate it when they're apart.

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Like Aurore and Bakasi, I also hate when Lois and Clark are apart. I also hope Clark returns to Lois. It has to be hard watching the man you love change and knowing you can’t be there to help him. All Lois can do is support him with her monthly holographic messages.

Thanks for a great chapter! I love this story!

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Oh 🥺 I feel so much pain for them; I sometimes wonder if it isn’t even harder to have a holographic message than a letter. The need to touch each other must be unbearable.

When I started writing this I never thought about that aspect of the holographs. Seeing Clark change because of his heavy responsibilities is something Lois has to endure, which is not an easy thing for her to do.

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I love that she's even yelling at his holographic image. It must be so hard on Lois to watch Clark's transformation into a warrior. How will this affect them once Clark can return, assuming that is what will happen eventually? I sure hope it does. Like Aurore, I hate it when they're apart.

Love your story, though.

As we have seen in the past, Lois yells/babbles out of frustration. To see the man she loves changing into someone different is scary! She is so far away from him and only has the words sent via the courier to convey all her love and encouragement.

Clark is changing into Kal-El, a man who must fight for what he believes in. Nonetheless, at the same time he is holding onto the man who used to bring her coffee every morning. It is a delicate balance, but if anyone can do it, it is Clark Kent.


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