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Sorry about the week long delay! RL was a BEAR. In any case, we see the fallout from the attack on Ur Collective.

Mar-Ur is furious
Kal-El is ready to fight
Jen-Mai is ready to ....


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As soon as the door closed, Jen-Mai began to pace rapidly across the floor, his mind racing. He was fully aware that Nor had launched his attack because Mar-Ur had sided with that pretender Kal-El. But the man must be out of his mind to use those Viper ships in a raid on the Ur Estate.

Nor has assured him they were meant to be held back until his forces were ready to attack their final target: the capital. Using them now put them at risk that some zealous person, possibly Ken-Ja, would track the ships back to his department.
I hope Kal realizes soon what Jen-Mai is up to. They can't win while they have a traitor among them.

Poor Kara! mecry I hope Dar-Ur is found alive. grovel

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I hope Kal realizes soon what Jen-Mai is up to. They can't win while they have a traitor among them.

Poor Kara! mecry I hope Dar-Ur is found alive. grovel

Jen-Mai is a coward, as you will soon see.


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I believe the attack on the Ur collective marks a turn in this war. All parties seem to have turned more eager to finish this. And Clark seems to create his share of enemies. Hopefully, things will turn out all right for him.

I can imagine how very frustrating this would be for him, the man who could always solve such problems in a matter of minutes or hours, is now forced to wait for others to get the intel.


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I was hoping they wound realize that Jen-Mai is a traitor. I hope Clark figures it out soon.

I hope Dar is found alive. Poor Kara!! It’s heartbreaking!

Thanks for another terrific chapter! I love this story!


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