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I have just one word to your story: YUM!
I loved it, Nicole! It's so sweet, beautiful and WAFFy! Perfect to Christmas time!

Thank you for this gift!

Andreia

That is two Yums from me<g> Adorable! Happy Holidays. Laura

I just read the whole story. I love it. Sooo cute!

Jackie

What a sweet story. I loved the last line! But I still think that Clark needs to really take Lois dancing. Maybe in a sequel? Susan

YAY!!! I just read the whole thing tonight and it was fab. Sigh I needed a Christmas 'up'.

Warm fuzzies - a good thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cute, cute holiday story! I just caught up with it today.


JD

Okay, and also just wanted to make another quick comment... I love the FDK thread header in this folder too! I grinned like an idiot when I saw "It's all just so... yum!" written for the folder!

And Andreia... I LOVE your holiday icons... THEY put me in the holiday moooood!


THANKS EVERYONE!!! YOU GUYS ROCK!



happy holidays~

NICOLE

I'm also just catching up after being away for two weeks.

I really enjoyed this little romp with Lucy. I thought it was well crafted. Loved the title and how well the theme of the song echoed through the whole story.

Lucy's character was fun as well. I felt she was a much younger person than the one we saw on TV, but she was so full of infectious life. I thought that the way she manipulated Perry to do what she wanted, and the rest of the newsroom, worked. Yes, Perry would see your Lucy as the spoiled younger daughter whom he could indulge. Everyone in the newsroom picked up on Lucy's holiday spirit and wanted to get Lois and Clark together. They were tired of walking on egg shells around the two of them.

The surprise worked. Lois was so busy being upset over the Lucy/Clark relationship that she missed all the holiday preparations. And so she was surprised.

And the two sisters had a great talk at the end. Lucy really helped Lois open her eyes.

And Lois did get her perfect kiss under the mistletoe.

Perfect for a cold, wintery day. In short, this story was yum.

gerry

I loved this story. I think you did a great job with Lucy's character. You can tell she is a Lane!! So, how about a sequel?

Jen A

I just caught up on this one, too, and it's delightful, Nicole! Loved Lucy's manipulating, and how she got Clark to act just guilty enough to make Lois totally miserable And then how she got Lois to finally open her eyes to what she was doing and what it was costing her.

Really enjoyed this.

PJ

Nicole

Congratulations on a wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia

Hi Nicole!

I guess I’m writing this more for future readers, though. I found this story ages ago, probably while I was researching Kerth nominations, or perhaps a Christmas theme. Anyway, Lucy Lane Is Coming to Town has such fun and spark and the adapted Christmas jingle embedded in the story certainly doesn’t hurt.

Aside from the seasonal angle, the main point of this story is Lucy playing matchmaker in the most sneaky kind of way. And it’s done in such an adorable way. I’m sorry that I don’t have a lengthy quoting of the entire story but I didn’t have time for a re-read right now

http://www.lcfanfic.com/stories/2005/html/lucylane.html

This is for the December 2024 scavenger hunt

Aside from the declaration of love fulfilling the scavenger hunt task, this is also really beautiful!

Hmm… I did read the list and checked it twice, unfortunately, this story doesn’t qualify for any of the other fun scavenger items and my mind just wasn’t up for digging out a fallen Luthor do satisfy the jumping upper-class man. And I’m sure we have at least one story out there with Lois trying to milk a cow. Or one with a bachelorette party (you did not specify the type of ‘hen’) and anyway…I wanted to go with a Christmas classic.

Michael