Mike M, hey there! Thanks so much for taking the time to reply -- I'm glad it was an enjoyable read!
...you're right about Chapter 2 being Lois uplifting Clark. I also wonder if this chapter is actually a chapter 2 to Clark trying to prop up Lois, and seeing it not working... Hmm. You've got a good idea there. I'll pop it into the back-burner and let you know if I write them.
Also, I WHOLLY agree about Deborah Joy Levine having the potential to give us something a little meatier/more complex to work with relationship-wise at the top of season 2 if she'd remained the show runner. Such a tragedy to miss out on that.
bakasi, thanks so much for the kind words! I really appreciate it!