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FDK: Stuck in the Dark 3/? #302012 04/08/25 02:38 PM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 47 Oklahoma aPurpleOkie OP Blogger
OP aPurpleOkie Blogger Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 47 Oklahoma	Please provide any comments here. Thank you! "Everything is okay in the end... If it's not okay, then it's not the end." ~Anonymous

Re: FDK: Stuck in the Dark 3/? aPurpleOkie #302032 04/10/25 12:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,899 Likes: 49 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,899 Likes: 49 Somewhere on the East Coast	Winning a Kerth - especially your first - is a very big deal indeed. Quote "Kallen Ellis?" Her voice was a quiet whipcrack, like she was daring him to correct her. "Yes?" He replied, infusing the question into his tone. "I have questions, and I believe you'd rather I ask them in private. Do not insult my intelligence by pretending you don't know who I am." She responded, the edge never leaving her voice. Kallen Ellis indeed. Clark you are in so much trouble! How did you think that Lois would not confront you? aPurpleOkie, Part 3 was a gentle rollercoaster. Poor Kal is simply trying to blend in and not cause any trouble. Unfortunately, a 'little tornado' with the initials LL has other plans. But at least she is requesting they go someplace private to talk. Personally I'm surprised Perry and Jimmy aren't with her. Onto the next chapter! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Stuck in the Dark 3/? aPurpleOkie #302035 04/10/25 02:45 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,747 Likes: 61 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,747 Likes: 61 Germany	Loved how you described the Kerths ceremony and Clark struggling to go unnoticed. That moment of shock when he realizes that Lois will be there as well. Of course, what was he thinking? The moment she walks past him, maybe not recognizes him, but of course she does, so she confronts him in the end. So well done. Thanks for sharing It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Stuck in the Dark 3/? aPurpleOkie #302084 04/16/25 04:27 AM
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90stvfangirl Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 127 Likes: 12 ‘Straya	I have nothing to say except I am sprinting to the next chapter!! 🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️ tiktok tumblr Ao3

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