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Well, Let me know what you think!
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Nice little fic. A fun, well-executed idea. (Though it would have been even better if it had been a little longer *g*) Anyway. Keep these coming!  See ya, AnnaBtG.
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What a fun, inventive little vignette, Shayne. I love how you keep coming up with these. I quite enjoyed that. Thanks!
Chris
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Cute little twist on things. Nice. Laura
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That was great. Fun idea and good execution. Any plans for expanding it?
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Neat - love the idea that he stands out because he isn't colorful.
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Shane! All these short fics you've been writing recently have been great. They've all given an interesting perspectives and clever twists on Lois and Clark. And the subtle and not so subtle crossovers have been fun. I've really enjoyed them Sorry that this is a bit of collective feedback for them all, I've been really busy recently (ok, that's a lie, I've been on holiday  - but it still means I've not been able to give as much feedback as I'd like) This one really made me smile, I loved the idea of using 20th century dress as a disguise. Thank you! Helga
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Agreed. it's a shame it wasn't longer but it's an adorable idea! It was really a cute twist and I've gotta say that the redshirts reference was great.
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Oh, that's so cute. The guy in the suit stands out...yeah, Lois, I don't think I could deal with a cape fashion trend either! Jen 
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This is great! Loved it! I'd love to see it expanded a bit.
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Oh, you've read that Superman story where Clark and Supes swap roles....  It didn't have the Trek elements, I admit (except for freaking out a super-computer -- Brainiac -- by illogic :rolleyes: ), but it was fun to read lines like Lois saying, "Oh, Superman! Why can't you be more like Clark Kent?" This is also fun, though, and if you do intend to go any further with it, I look forward to reading it. Now, there's a thought: how will "the captain" react to a business-suited hero and a reporter showing interest in his new lieutenant? Depends which captain, I suppose... Phil
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It's been wonderful to see you back on the boards with more of your vignettes, Shayne. Your sense of humour and intriguing characters insights certainly brighten up the day whenever they appear. Don't forget to send them along to the Archive, too! LabRat
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Actually, Phil, I hadn't seen that story. I'd thought I was being original. <g>
Thanks for all the feedback, everyone. Weirdly, there does seem to be a little room for expansion on this. Hmmm...
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