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Nice part Missy, and the last paragraphs are fantastic!  more soon!! Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Nicely done. Powerful and very melodramatic.
This waffy bit of exploration by our confused couple is the perfect set up for the whams yet to come. I wonder how Lex is going to be taking all this 'burgeoning romance' stuff between Lois and Clark. Especially since Lex thinks Kent is a non-entity.
Tank (who thinks that Missy could post these parts more quickly and he wouldn't mind)
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Great part, Missy! I look forward to the next one.  You did a great job with Lois' introspection about her feelings for Clark and Superman. I loved the way Lois is able to be there for Clark while he deals with the loss of his super powers. I also loved the use of the song in the last paragraphs, the fact that Lois 'knows' it's Clark's favorite and the way she consoles him with it.  Avia (not so patiently checking her inbox  )
"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"
Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05
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this is so sweet - i love the introspection & the dance is just wonderful.
sorry for not commenting more often - i have been enjoying this story since the beginning & i'm still loving it.
more soon please!
You must be the change you wish to see in the world.
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So WAFFy. So bittersweet. Poor Clark.  Poor Lois.  Is it time for the next part yet? How about NOW?
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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I am really enjoying this. So much that I actually stopped lurking around, as I have been for a while, and registered !
Hope to see more soon.
Allie
How about NOW? [/QB][/QUOTE]
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 Hi Missy, I'm confused. After Part 15, the Parts labeled 16, 17, 18, and 19 - are actually 18, 19, 20, and 21???? Are there parts missing?? Also, what is a Nfic folder, and where can I find it? Please advise. I'd really like to read this story, but I don't want to miss any of the 'Parts'. thanks, Linda
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Linda, you'll find all the parts of this story - and any other - in the TOC (Table of Contents) section of this forum. The Nfic folder is directly beneath this one and is the forum for more adult fiction. To gain access to it you'll need to fill in the request form and be admitted by the admins. Just follow the link on the front of the board under the folder name. Hope that helps. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Hi Linda,
Be assured that whether you start reading WLGTDWI in gfic or nfic the parts are all there. I originally started posting this in nfic and when I started posting here in gfic, I combined a couple of shorts sections creating the numbers difference.
Missy
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Speaking of which, Missy, when are we going to see the next part of this? Reading fic is my way of beating the holiday stress. I need *more*!
Nan
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You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
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Ohh!! Naggers!! <g> Now that the madness of the holidays are almost over and Strangers is finished!!! (/me cheers wildly), I'll be back writing What's Love. Hey, I even opened the file this morning! <g> Thanks for asking!  Missy
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Ooooh!
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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Strangers is finished? /me tries to remember if she saw it in her mailbox, can't recall, and decides to nag anyway, just in case...
LabRat (firmly believing you should always join naggers wherever possible...)
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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YAY! We want more WL!!!! Oh, and Rat... LabRat (firmly believing you should always join naggers wherever possible...) Okay, then here's a nag for you to join in... We Want More LabRat Stories!!!!  Wendy
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Okay, then here's a nag for you to join in... We Want More LabRat Stories!!!! Where do I have to sign?  Jose
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I'll be back writing What's Love. YAY! 
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Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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You mean we're supposed to have lives?
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Joining the nagging team...
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