That was great Paul!! Very clever how you included the result of the poll in the story.
What should Lois do now...hmm
First, snooping around the ship, if possible take some samples of the drugs.
Then she should think about everyone who knows/suspects that Clark is Superman (Diana Stride, Tempus...). After all someone apparently waited with kryptonite in his apartment, it is possible that it was someone who knows the connection.
Then of course track these peoples down. Where are they now (in prison, on the run?)?
Then she could think about this "secret admirer", who sent her the tip. Are there any persons who did show affection towards Lois? Maybe send a return mail and look if he/she reacts. Maybe she could get any further information this way.
I've run out of thoughts for now...
Too much I's or just my imagination.
Is she talking to someone?
Maria, the story is written in the first person, alternately from Lois's/Clark's point of view. It is as if Lois/Clark is telling us the story. So naturally there have to be many I's.
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