Hey MDL,

LOVED LOVED the story. It turned out differently then I expected at the end. But I LOVED IT!!!. Keep up the good work hon.

OH and this part had me cracking up..

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“Come on… stupid thing. Come on!!!”

The elevator closed its doors.

5th floor.

(…)

4th floor.

(…)

3rd floor.

“Come ooooooooooooooooooonnnn!!!”

2nd floor.

(…)

1st floor.

“*&%$¨&&*&¨%$*!!!”

ground floor.
Can't wait to see more stories from you!

Rach


Me: what are you looking at *Snatches pic* OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?!
Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate!
Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate!
Sara: LMAO the *chocolate* isn't smeared in chocolate!
Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate
Sara: ROTFLMAO