I found this part amusing:
“Oh, Clark… I love you too.”
A kiss.
“What about London?” A kiss. “…I have to go…”
“You´re not…” A kiss. “…going…” A kiss. “…anywhere.”
“I am…” A kiss “…not?”
“I…” A kiss. “…talked to Perry…” A kiss “…and he said…” A kiss “Elise is taking the job.”
“Oh…” A kiss “… that was what…” A kiss “…she was trying to tell…” A kiss “…me.”
“Yeah.” A kiss.
I did find it go at a way quicker pace than the other parts. Were you in a rush?
I dislike Gallan. Why didn't he have enough guts to tell Stella his feeling in the beginning and she wouldn't have to have been such a sceemer (can't remember how to spell that word). Well I am glad it ended up alright. I wouldn't want Clark to go bye bye.
Just curious. Why was the final two chapter instead of ch 2 being the final and ch 1 being whatever number after the last one was?
OH. You left me dangeling. Clark never told Lois! Eek. OH well LOL. I guess we know how that will end up! Great ending to a funny and scarey story! Oh, I still love the title!!!
