Well I just finished part 1
The elevator closed its doors.
5th floor.
(…)
4th floor.
(…)
3rd floor.
“Come ooooooooooooooooooonnnn!!!”
2nd floor.
(…)
1st floor.
“*&%$¨&&*&¨%$*!!!”
ground floor.
That part made me laugh. The way it is written and spaced made me feel for Lois - oh dear slow elevators, or at least they feel that way when you wanna just GO GO GO!
I can't believe that Lois missed her calls. Poor Lois. I feel bad that she is afraid for Clark at the moment.
Off to part two...
oh why do you feel insecure? This rocks! I love this story. It had such a weird story line going on! THat's so cool!
