Just a quick note. I'm editing the post for part 7, but since most of you probably won't go back to it, I thought it be better to post this here too.
Jose pointed something out to me and >I forgot to let you guys know. I don't know if anyone else has realized it, but in the scene at Centennial Park, Lois says it's three days before her wedding, but then in what seems like the next day, it reads that it's Lex's last day as a bachelor. The mistake is in Lois's scene. It should say two days. And at the beginning of part 6 (Clark arriving at home), it should read three nights and not four:
There was nothing strange in her not being home four nights before her wedding day. What was it he'd expected?
The mistake actually comes way from the beginning. Luthor tells Superman (in the scene where he finds out the secret) that it's seven days to the wedding. Well, it's six in fact.
Hope I didn't cause too much trouble! It will all be fixed before the story goes to the archive (and I'll try to edit the posts too)
Cris
Ps. I'll be back on a couple of days to actually repply to all of your comments
