Yay! Rachel's safe!
I was nervous all the way through here, that something would happen to keep Rachel tied up in red tape hell...
And Lois has a point about older kids... no diapers, and they can at least talk -- getting them to tell the truth can be a little trickier, but what the heck
Can't wait to see Rachel meet Clark! And then there's the continuing a-plot that needs to be wound up -- certain people need to have horrible things happen to them
Great work, Laura!

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PJ