Wendy!
I have really enjoyed this gentle journey of discovery Lois has gone through. I really felt that as a reader, I was able to fall in love right along with her.
The bonus of having some familiarity with the characters allowed me to imagine what Clark was thinking at the same time, but I know that your version (meaning the parts to come) will be much better.
I love the tangents that Lois goes off on in her mind. You do wonders with giving a voice to the characters.
Can't wait for Betrayed!
~sunkist
