Just read this again, Pam, and liked it as much as I did the first time.
If you remember, I told you early on that either this Lyn was a Mary Sue or she was Lois in disguise
- glad to see I was right the second time.
Lovely dialogue, and even nicer observations and reactions from 'Lyn'. Very cleverly done - the first person, present tense is perfect for this one. You kept it light, WAFFy and even humorous, but there's deeper emotion just simmering beneath the surface for both of them - that comes across very clearly.
Great vignette!
Wendy
