Sweet, Pam!
Like Wendy, I think the first person/present tense worked prefectly for this story (which surprised me, seeing as I usually don't like either one, especially when they're combined <g>). And I absolutely *love* how Lois decided to 'feel him out' before revealing herself. And the fact that she had a crush on him from afar certainly helped the start of their relationship.
No trying to wear down the barriers of 'who do you think you are, trying to control...everything?'
Great job!
Bethy (who wouldn't mind a sequel, but also thinks this stands perfectly well on its own)
