Thank you, Pam!
I've been wanting to get back into reading fic on the mbs again, but I couldn't handle the idea of trying to play catch-up. I needed something short and sweet to get started with, and you go ahead and post something as delightful as this!
For the record, I twigged when she called him "Mr. Kent" rather than Superman. I read it after whatever tweaking you'd done so I've no idea about the additions or subtractions.
You did miss a few past tenses, though: "He really looked miserable" rather than "looks" and "I think that shocked him" rather than "shocks."
Lovely piece, Pam! A great little "dimension rewrite" rather than ep rewrite, and extremely satisfying.
Hazel, happy to be FDKing again
