Really enjoyed Mason coming into the story--Lois is normally at her 'best' when she is all worked up about Mason, and definitely she was here. I loved how Clark loved that she was jealous--and the fact that he picked up on it right away.
The parts where Lois was snippy with Mason and Clark was giving her a look/a warning glare/where Lois called her Ms. Snake...the back and forths between Lois and Clark there were really classic. It came across as so authentically 'them'--I could just picture these moments unfolding
Bobby was written so 'Bobby'--wow, you really captured him
. And way to go, Bobby, telling Clark how obvious it is that Clark is in love with Lois. Clark being so surprised that Bobby had figured his feelings out was
. Come on Clark, we all know how much you've always loved Lois, too
.
Looking forward to seeing how you wrap everything up--should be a blast!
Great story
Laura
