His mouth tightened. “That you know nothing about me at all, Lois. That when you said you’d still love me even if I were an ordinary man...” His hands formed into fists once more. “You were lying. Because I am an ordinary man, and you don’t.”
You can feel his relief with just the etchings of his bitterness about the situation, too, in these few words.
There's so much here to write about but I really would be writing what everyone here already has written!
Wendy, I'm in constant awe of your talent, and this story's got me! My god, you are good! I LOVE IT! I am going to read that section again, that begins w/ that first quote! Hehe
~NICOLE
ps- might part 14 be on its way for your OTHER amazing, fantastic, lovely, excruciatingly angsty story also currently residing on the boards???
