I really enjoyed this one. I especially liked how you Show the thoughts of Lois and why she does what she does. I always could strangle her in this park Scene and the next one - perhaps your Story helped me a bit to understand her better. I also love that BOTH Lois and Clark finally see their mistakes and say this each other.
I also enjoyed Clark realising he couldn't have both: Lois don't recognizing him, but seeing still Clark in him. I can't remember any other fic who showed this, and I'm afraid about that, because it makes so much sense! Thanks for writing! Nick
