Hey Terry,
Thanks for reading and giving some of your thoughts about this. It's always good to see what other think both to motivate and to improve writing.
Don't mind the nickname, no problem. :-)
I'm glad you liked the tale. I know that Mayson is one of this characters on the show most people on the boards seem to dislike because she tries to pull Clak away from Lois, though I don't think that is exactly justified, especially with Clark showing little to no interest in her.
I do believe that she is a good person in general and I didn't like that they just killed her off. That's a rather poor way to write someone out, it would have been better IMO if they had talked it out...
I always felt the show never explained what exactly were the reasons for Mayson's constantly Superman bashing so I tried to give her some character depth here.
I do believe that some of the problems she noted here could be difficult in a "realistic" world featuring superheroes.
Some of the inspiration for that, I believe, comes from a Supergirl Episode where Kara and Detective Maggie are arguing about same issue.
About the sentence:
It had been a long and tiring day for her and she was served.
Well, I think that's a classic case of a saying that can't be translated that well. I just wanted to point out that it was a long day and she just has enough and wants to end it, I'll change that sentence to make it hopefully ore understandable.
It had been a long and tiring day for her and she was done.
