Hey Cuidadora,
Thanks for your kind feedback!
Giving characters more depth than they have on a show is always something I enjoy in reading fanfic. It's fascinating how the same character, for instance, can be interpreted very differently by various authors. So, some characters are good people in author A's story while they are bad guys in author B's work, and so on...
Yes, the topic is quite interesitng. The show writers and maybe the fanfic readers and writers too, forgot often that not everyone gets this deep look into Clark/Superman's perosnality we have, and thus, don't know how his mind works and what possible motives he could have. The world has a lot of cynical and mistrusting people, so it's just relaistic to think about that stuff.
I hope you'll finish your story some day in the future so we can read your thoughts on the topic.
About Lois and Mayson - well, I believe the main point of their rivalry is Clark, but sure, it could have erased at least one argument between them.
