oh, this was great. just...
oh, and going for regular soda... nice.
trying desperately not to use up too many graemlins, but i had to point this one out...
She shook her head slightly then winced from the effort. "Not your fault. My sister's fault. I'm going to kill her."
Clark couldn't help but smile at her ironic tone. "Will there be drinks at the wake?"
i did find it odd that jimmy's friend had such a similar experience to lois's. i understand what you were going for, but it would have been nice if at least some of the details had been different.
not happy to see things nearly as awkward between l&c as i'd feared, but i'm trusting that'll be fixed with part 4.
great story, guys!
Paul
p.s. yep. used too many graemlins. <sigh> you guys are just too good...