That was great! I liked the fight, Lois' confusion over why they were suddenly fighting, her storming out without her coat or purse (where were her lockpicks? Do I even want to know?), the fact that she made herself at home at Clark's place, and the gentle way she told him that she knew. No explosion, no accusation, no anger, just understanding and forgiveness on both their parts. Excellent tale, and maybe that's the way it should have happened. It would've save a lot of stupid later on.

My favorite part of a terrific story is the very end.

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"Lois? Can I—" Her fingers flew to his lips again to stop him.

She leaned closer, and dropped her fingers...her mouth now millimeters away. “Clark,” she whispered against his lips. “Shut up and kiss me.”

Here's the song for that line. Enjoy.


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- Stephen King, from On Writing