ArcadeDreams, thank you so much for popping in and taking the time to comment. I do completely love these characters, and I'm glad that came through in the text. I'm so happy you found this moving - it's very kind of you to say!
KSaraSara, thank you SO much for your in-depth comments. I did go back and adjust that section that you and Michael were kind enough to point out, including an earlier cue from Lois. And I'm not sure I ever said that I appreciated that you felt the emotional journey wrapped up here for these two in this story. ...although you and I both know how that really turned out!
You're the absolute best cheerleader, and every "GAHHHH" goes straight to my heart!
