Welcome back to the boards. It has been a number of years since your name appeared here.
Now on to the comments:
“That’s our farmhouse,” he said. “My mother’s kitchen is behind the left window. She will have seen you stop here. If I don’t take you in for a drink and something to eat, she is going to be really annoyed with me. I’m surprised she isn’t already charging down the hill to find out what is taking so long.”
Farmhouse - Check
Clark - Check
Martha - Check
I do not see or have read any mention of Jonathan Kent. Where is he?
Is this the young street-wise Jack that we all know and love? Since this is an AU story that might not be the case. Is he hiding out in the middle of Kansas for a serious reason or is he part of a story that Lois is working on in order to redeem her career? Lots of questions.
“It’s home,” Clark said.
“But?” Lois persisted.
“There’s a big world out there.”
Would he move if he could? Would he take the opportunity to experience something different? Did he want to? If he did, what was holding him here?
Much of the story rests on these lines. I have no doubt this fic is going to be epic.
Again, welcome back.
