Hi JadedEvie Thanks for the wonderful feedback.
As I've mentioned elsewhere, this story didn't start with an idea, but a feeling that maybe I could play with a story and see where it went. It did occur to me that I could be re-molding the characters of Lois and Clark to fit them to the circumstances I wanted to write about. It is very encouraging to hear that they still sound (and act) like Lois and Clark. Thanks.
Corrina.