If it were possible to be transported to a farm in the middle of Kansas, it was done with this story. The conversations between the characters, the description of the many hours of work and of course waiting for Bess to calve has been restful. It is easy to tell the people writing has spent much time on her farm and loves it very much.

Line by line and part by part, the story is become clearer.

On to the next part.

Last edited by Morgana; 06/05/24 02:29 PM.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.