Thanks to Mike M, Bakasi, and Songbird for the feedback. I felt this chapter was a little bit 'more of the same' - necessary, but not big on story progression. Thanks for appreciating the slow build.
I will tell you that one of the big questions gets answered in Chapter 8.
Corrina.
Edited to add - also glad the medical details were not too much. I thought about giving a warning, but the farm kids across the road deal with these details from the time they're very young, so left it out. I'm trying to show the realities of farm life, and these things happen and need to be dealt with.
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