Thanks for the fdk Andreia and Anna! Glad you both liked it! And thanks for the *special* thread name Andreia! I love it. Hee hee.
Anna, I actually didn't realize until after I posted the story that I didn't have any scene breaks in the story.
And you're right, since I wrote it all from Clark's POV I wasn't sure I needed any.
Sorry about that. I've gone back and inserted some in appropriate places. Maybe I should have posted this in two parts? After my last story this one felt short to me, so I just did one post. Sorry to have worn you out
- I made the suggested improvements.
**edited** - Andreia, I just realized you've *updated* your original comments...thank you again so much - your additional comments are wonderful and so appreciated!
