Yay, a sequel to H is for Hubris *and* a re-write of IGACOY!!! I've been waiting for this ever since you first mentioned it!!
I loved the whole story, but these are my favorite lines:
She didn't even notice how soft Clark's hair was, or marvel at the physique he was hiding behind those concealing business suits, or thrill at his rare polite touches. Or at least, not much.
Poor Lois. Clark is just too good to ignore... most of the time
But he didn't want to use Superman to jump-start their relationship. It felt like cheating, or bragging.
I thought that was an interesting point. Yeah, at this point in their relationship it almost would seem like bragging -- because she was falling over Superman and not Clark.
